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Oral - 11-10-2007, 08:47 PM

Hi, for my japanese oral (under the topic of tourist attractions) I wrote a page on holidaying at the gold cost.

I know that it's not complex japanese, and my extent of vocab and sentence structure is horribly limited, but I was hoping that someone would be able to read through it and see if anything is horrible wrong with it. >.<

There were a lot of parts where I just hazarded a guess, as I wasn't too sure if it would be correct or not.

Also, right now, I'm not sure what word to use for 'popular'



If anyone can help out, that'd be really great!

Really appreciate any input, and thanks in advance. :3



It's a scanned image file, so I hope it can be read. Click for enlarged version.
I only just realised, butI forgot the ten-tens on: doudesuka (par1) and on Goorudo Koosuto (par3)

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