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11-12-2007, 09:27 AM

Thanks so much for these corrections; I can see how much I have to improve on! TAT


In line 15, I actually meant for it to say 'convenient buildings'
... partially because I myself didn't know what to write it as, since that area is similar to a shopping district, but it also supplies accommodation & other city buildings.


Anyways, I think I'm just about done fixing up the text. o_o;
I've learnt so much in such a short amount of time just by posting here.
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