[kudo]

¬¬...its a little too detailed, no? with the unbuckling of seatbelts and whatnot.

actually, it might not a bad thing. o_O; (quick to change aren't i? lol)
even if its extremely detailed to the point of unbuckling seatbelts...it gives the reader a sense of confidenc that they'll know everyting they need. i mean..if the person goes as far to write unckle seat belts before getting off the plane...xD