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04-14-2008, 12:43 AM

First of all, it's たすけて, not たすけって. The latter sounds more Italian than Japanese. lol

Second of all, you almost had that sentence! One thing I need to ask to make it better is whether the fact that it was raining had anything to do with the fact that people were using the South Exit out of all exit choices. That will determine the ending of the first part of the sentence.


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