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02-18-2007, 06:45 PM

"Seaside, i remember when i was-" i froze. I was talking to Suzette and then she was gone. Where was she? "oh my god, wheres suzette?" Charlie was already starting the engine. "lets go!" she said. We got in her car and sped off. I had no idea where she was. My parents werent answering me, nothing was right. Was this it? did i really lose her? I didnt wanna believe it. I started to cry very softly. She doesnt even know how I feel, and now she'll never know. Suddenly I heard a voice. "Ocean County mall." it was my dad! Thats where she was! The old mall! It wasnt far from seaside either. We went there and it was dark and foggy, but i wasnt leaving without her. "hello Yamato." said BD. "Bedeviler! I'm going to kill you today!" i screamed in anger. "i think not, if I die, the girl dies. and yamato Im not a fool, you love her, its all over you, your feelings are your downfall."

"where is she?" i demanded. He pointed inside. I ran in and Charlie said "I'll handle this asshole." i stopped, "charlie you cant see him."

"i know yamato, but I can kill him i know it" she said. I nodded and ran inside, "SUZETTE!" i screamed, no answer. I searched everywhere and found her in a small dungeon room chained to a wall. I went to free her. She was completely knocked out and bleeding. While freeing her she slowly regained consciousness. "I'm sorry Suzette. Im sorry I wasnt there to save you." "its fine Yamato." and she kissed me on the cheek. She was almost free when I heard a voice "How cute." It was Bedeviler. "wheres charlie?" i asked. "look for yourself," he said. Charlie walked in eyes beaming red just like samurai and suzette. "No..." i said frightened. "you son of a bitch. You killed my family, my dog and almost my friends." I prepared for a battle of a lifetime...

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