ok, I officially declare this the end of part 1 of this story. Let me put it this way, if this were a movie, the sequel would start now. I want the storyline of the next part to be about Suzette's and Charlie's fight against king raymond. But of course theres got to be that little side story between Yamato and Suzette thats developing. Bedeviler is dead, so we need an even worse enemy to fight. Possibly a right hand man of the king with some mystical power to him like bedeviler. This first part was amazing and it was done by just 4 people who arent professional writers who (except for me and sweet suicide lol) dont even know eachother at a personal level.
