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I'm not very good with grammar, but the second sentence in the second paragraph is really confusing. I think it's the commas, but I'm not sure. It should say "humans" not human.

You said "I think" a lot. If it's really important, then I would change it up a bit so it doesn't seem like you're repeating yourself.

Sorry if I'm not much help.