[Yuusuke]

Originally Posted by YuriTokoro

Hi.
Please correct my English, please.

"Rain"

It’s raining in Kawasaki Japan. We’ve had many rainy days, (but the rainy season hasn't started yet.) We've had nine rainy days last month (May).
I’ve heard there are many places that suffer a water shortage. The people who live in such places would think Japanese people are so lucky, but I thinkrain in Japan is too much I always wish we could share this rain with people who need it while I know it’s impossible. Seawater desalination would be cheaper than the transportation of this rain water.

When my American friends came here, they didn’t bring umbrellas. This was hard to believe. Sure enough, it started raining while we were doing some sightseeing, so we had to take a taxi and take a shelter in an arcaded(what?) street.
I recommend you to bring an umbrella when you visit Japan. Of course you could buy one here if you want.

Thank you.

Good good! i liked it.
just a few corrections