What language have you written your novel in? It's just I don't mean to be a downer, but with your level of English shown in the post I don't think it'd be possible for you to write a successful English novel. If you've written it in your native tongue then you may be more successful of course, in which case I wish you all the best of luck
As for your question itself, are you asking how to make your novel into an anime series or movie? Or are you simply asking for a critique of your novel?