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02-24-2011, 07:47 PM

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Originally Posted by RyoIchiru View Post
Soft and subtle, quiet as she goes.

Lost in her eyes, the color? Goes unknown.

It's obvious, this feeling, untamed within.

Love, I love you, so strong, who's gonna win?

Yet the fire is silenced, cooled by your departure.

So alone, just, alone.

Sitting in a comfort I feel is gone.

Come back to me.

Please, no longer stay a fantasy.

If I did wrong, it wasn't my fault.

I didn't know, please, please, please let me know.

Alone, alone, alone.....

-Sorry guys, random feelings.- I KNOW IT SUCKS. I just miss her...
Don't apologise, you're just stating how you care about her (a lot I imagine).
I've read some pretty cool poetry from you all, thanks for sharing.
To answer the original question, I usually do art for my beloved instead as my poetry is... so-so.

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