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Originally Posted by Koir
Very good advice, Yuri. I had not heard of cellphone charms like a flashlight or even a whistle, but now having them seems to be a good idea. Flashlights especially can be very small, so having one at all times is possible.
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I believe a flashlight would be very helpful if you were trapped under rubble in the dark.
However, You don’t seem to need it because your country doesn’t have a lot of earthquakes.
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Not many revisions were needed in your composition. Most of them were just changing verbs to be more descriptive or changing verb tenses to better reflect the point in time the action did or could occur.Also, some words were changed to communicate the sentence concepts clearer.
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I see.
My weakness seems to be verbs.
I know you always correct the verbs, but verb tenses is difficult…….
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One sentence you wrote in the composition greatly impressed me:
"I’ve had this whistle for years."
This shows that you have a growing understanding of verbs and how they can be used to modify others verbs to create a deeper communication of concepts with less words.
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I’ll try my best.
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Good work, Yuri! 
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Thanks.
Your continued support will be greatly appreciated.
