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Originally Posted by JohnBraden
I'd like to know if there are any grammatical mistakes in the following sentence.
ここはおにわにおかあさんとはな子さんとまさおさんと いしょにえほんみてをいます。
I haven't learned many kanji characters, so if you would like to correct it, please keep that in mind. Thanks for any help!
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What are you trying to say?
"Here is, in the garden, mother and Hanako and Masao with me looking at a picture"? "Mother, Hanako, Masao are looking at a picture with me in the garden"? "Mother, Hanako, Masao, and I are looking at this picture in the garden"? Do you even mean to mention "I" at all? Because you are implying it by saying 〜と〜と〜といっしょに as opposed to 〜と〜と〜はいっしょに.
I can, no matter what you're trying to say, tell you that you have をみています incorrect because you wrote みてをいます.