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Originally Posted by JohnBraden
Supperman, how much would you like us to correct? Do you want us to just correct the grammar or also the content? What I mean to say is, while most of the sentences are correct to some degree, what you want to say can be expressed in fewer but more concise sentences. Heaven knows I'm not an English grammar major, but I can re-write most of your sentences to make them at least sound more fluid. I don't want you to think I'm being mean. It's great you're trying this for your own education. And if I were to know Japanese half as well as you know English, I'd be much happier!
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Hi.
Thank you for your concern.
How much would I like you to correct?
Thoroughly!
The more you correct, the more I would thank you.
But I know that a proofreading takes a lot of time, and much effort,
and basically, it should be payed with a certain amount of money.
As this is a forum of volunteers and free of charge, please correct me, as far as you like to do it.
Thank you in advance.