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It's kind of late, but please let me know if you'd still like corrections. It would take some time and a lot of space, so I don't want to do it if you won't read it.

I also want to say that for the question about "playing hamburger shop," "play" is fine for this use. Also, the person who works at the register is called a "cashier." And where I live on the East Coast of America, people say "Is that for here or to go?" and if you take it "to go" it's called "take-out."