My 1st manga pg

ELASHORTHYP · (#1 (**permalink**))

Hells angel page1003.jpgplease give me your comments to help me improve(>.<)

Im ok. at people but not good at backgrounds(- . -)

Gerard · (#2 (**permalink**))

does she bleed ???

anyhoo.. i like the eyes xD

chibiloli93 · (#3 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by Gerard

does she bleed ???anyhoo.. i like the eyes xD

No, (dis is my sis's manga)blood is dripping on her...

Gerard · (#4 (**permalink**))

ohh i see... I didn't see there was blood on the Walls and Roff..

Powermad147 · (#5 (**permalink**))

Ok, collective criticism...I won't pretend to be an expert XD. BUT, I think the hand could use a little work, it seems sort of akward, like the fingers are longer than they should be, and strangely hunched over. Also, a clearer panel layout would be nice. but that aside, it looks great ^_^ keep up the good work!

chibiloli93 · (#6 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by Powermad147

Ok, collective criticism...I won't pretend to be an expert XD. BUT, I think the hand could use a little work, it seems sort of akward, like the fingers are longer than they should be, and strangely hunched over. Also, a clearer panel layout would be nice. but that aside, it looks great ^_^ keep up the good work!

Can u go 2 chk out mine? i have a thread 4 it! Just look up threads started by me!