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Could someone please correct my English in my posts that I did on this forum? - 08-26-2011, 01:16 PM

Could someone please correct my English in my posts that I did on this forum?

I would like it to be done by those who are (nearly) frequent both in English and Japanese, and not only in speaking but also in writting regardless of their mother tongue, if possible.


I do know this will sound rude and kind of arrogant to you, however, since I am not that good at English, so I would eventually often ask you about any topics in Japanese....


I would be deeply grateful for your kindness if you would not mind of going all the trouble to do that.
To start with, how weird does the sentences (this post) sound to your native (or almost native) English ears ?

-----日本語でも書きます------
このフォーラムで私が英語で書き込んだレスを、どなた か添削して頂けますか?
できるなら、母国語を問わず英語・日本語ともに精通し 、かつ話し言葉だけでなく書き言葉にも堪能な方に(添 )して頂けると良いな、と思っています。
もちろんこんなお願いは不躾で、ある意味、傲慢なもの だとは重々承知しているのですが、なにしろ英語は不得 意でおそらくはしばしば日本語で質問することもあろう かと思いますので…。
手間を厭わずに添削してくださる方がいらっしゃれば大 変うれしく思います。
さて、(いま、私が書いている英語の)文章は英語話者の さんにはどのように聞こえるのでしょうか?
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I found my Japanese above a bit translated-ish. Please feel free to correct my Japanese as much as English.
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08-27-2011, 11:08 AM

Nevermind.


Your Japanese proficiency shall be in direct proportion
to your true interest in the Japanese Mind.

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