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New songs by EnDepth! - 07-10-2008, 08:01 PM

this is the newest song by my band. to read other songs, visit the thread
En Depth: the name of my band!
enjoy!


Haunted

Demons swimming
In my brain
I swear they’re
Driving me insane
Voices screaming
Can you hear?
Whispered memories
In my ear

Frost on the windowpane
Chilled breath of those
Forgotten long ago
Secrets dwelling underneath my skin

Ghosts of my past return
To haunt me here
Their voices haunt me like
The dark, and they are tearing
Me apart

Innocence
I brought from home
With me
Won’t matter when they come
For me
Close my eyes cause I can’t
Take it in

Tears from a guardian
Angel
Long lost, and far away
There’s nothing left
To take away the pain

I’ll find a hole to hide
Inside
Until the hurt’s at bay
When it’s over
I’ll go and face the rain

Chorus:
Haunted
Deep inside
Drowning
The tears I’ve cried
Haunted
By my sorrow
I wait, in pain
For a dead tomorrow

I am falling
Far from grace
I’m empty
I can’t find my place
All these voices
In my head
They make me wish that
I were dead

My mind is hearing things
My eyes don’t see
My eyes are seeing things
So horrifying, frightening
To me

I fell so broken down
Unfixable
I am grasping to my
Sanity and clarity
I’m so

(Chorus)
(Instrumental)
(Chorus x2)

The air is cold
Today
The sky these days
Is grey____


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07-10-2008, 08:20 PM

wow thats great i so want to hear your band play it!!!


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07-10-2008, 08:22 PM

why thank you miyavikun! long time no see!
i am quite proud of this one myself....


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07-10-2008, 08:35 PM

It is good!! Hi miya-kun!!!
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07-10-2008, 08:40 PM

It's okay.
Not bad at all but lacks alot of originality.



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.... - 07-11-2008, 02:00 PM

EveV, you are intitled to your opinion, though i must say i don't agree. what exactly is " unoriginal" about it???


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07-11-2008, 07:34 PM

if anyone has questions about my songs, feel free to ask.
if any one has questions about the band, feel free to ask.


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07-11-2008, 07:58 PM

I liked it a lot. I have to imagine though, that as cool as it sounds in my head, it must sound a lot cooler when you actually play it. Good work.


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07-11-2008, 08:02 PM

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I liked it a lot. I have to imagine though, that as cool as it sounds in my head, it must sound a lot cooler when you actually play it. Good work.
thanx Blackmariah! i know i know i am working on getting some songs up, ok...be patient.


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07-14-2008, 09:51 PM

I'm a patient person, I didn't mean to sound otherwise. Sorry. Anyway, again, good work.


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