someone fluent to translate 2-3 pages of a manga

[MMM]

Originally Posted by StonerPenguin

Oh, you merged the threads! At first I thought I'd double-posted

Nope...merged them.

[Izlude77714]

its kind of obvious the top left says birthday/height/weight
interested in the rest of the page
http://a.imageshack.us/img148/6701/33384895.jpg <--- very large image

[MMM]

You surely read the parts where I said "shrink them down" and "use imageshack".

[yuriyuri]

I was going to try and translate this, but there were one or two parts I couldn't put into English properly despite understanding them.
As such, I got bored and stopped... Basically I typed out the Japanese and was going to put translations with each part.

But as I said I got bored, so here is the Japanese with no translation.

Perhaps those who are learning to read more Kanji might find it useful, or it could be useful to those that want to try and translate for practice.

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For anyone who wants to try and translate for practice, these are character names that appear in the text:
猿柿ひよ里 - Sarugaki Hiyori
一護 - Ichigo
平子 - Hirako
織姫 - Orihime

I say this in case someone looks up 織姫 and tries to translate as "Female textile worker"
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誕生日・・・８月１日
身長・・・１３３ｃｍ
体重・・・２６ｋｇ

HIYORI SARUGAKI
猿柿ひよ里◆さるがき　ひより◆

人間と死神を嫌う短気な少女

八重歯がチャームポイントと言い張る気性の荒い少女。
口が悪く、ことあるごとに「ハゲ」を連発する。
一護に特訓を施す際は何かと衝突するが、面倒見のいい 部分も稀に見せる。

なにモタクサしてんねん
がしんたれが！！！

スンマセッ！！！

←一護の勧誘に失敗した平子に対して、土足のサンダル を使った本場仕込みの激しいツッコミ。
さすがの平子も思わず敬語になるほど。

猿柿ひよ里！

←正体を問われて名乗るひよ里。
織姫たちとの会話では、自身の名前や体型差に強烈な皮 肉を吐く。

Special Note
目つきの悪さを除けば金パツにツインテールと、意外と 美少女のひよ里。
過去に一度、見知らぬ者に声をかけられたことがある。
気が立っていたのか「っさいわ　ハゲ！」と無下に突っ ぱね平子たちが戦慄を覚えた。

[Izlude77714]

Originally Posted by yuriyuri

I was going to try and translate this, but there were one or two parts I couldn't put into English properly despite understanding them.
As such, I got bored and stopped... Basically I typed out the Japanese and was going to put translations with each part.

But as I said I got bored, so here is the Japanese with no translation.

Perhaps those who are learning to read more Kanji might find it useful, or it could be useful to those that want to try and translate for practice.

------------------------------------
For anyone who wants to try and translate for practice, these are character names that appear in the text:
猿柿ひよ里 - Sarugaki Hiyori
一護 - Ichigo
平子 - Hirako
織姫 - Orihime

I say this in case someone looks up 織姫 and tries to translate as "Female textile worker"
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誕生日・・・８月１日
身長・・・１３３ｃｍ
体重・・・２６ｋｇ

HIYORI SARUGAKI
猿柿ひよ里◆さるがき　ひより◆

人間と死神を嫌う短気な少女

八重歯がチャームポイントと言い張る気性の荒い少女。
口が悪く、ことあるごとに「ハゲ」を連発する。
一護に特訓を施す際は何かと衝突するが、面倒見のいい 部分も稀に見せる。

なにモタクサしてんねん
がしんたれが！！！

スンマセッ！！！

←一護の勧誘に失敗した平子に対して、土足のサンダル を使った本場仕込みの激しいツッコミ。
さすがの平子も思わず敬語になるほど。

猿柿ひよ里！

←正体を問われて名乗るひよ里。
織姫たちとの会話では、自身の名前や体型差に強烈な皮 肉を吐く。

Special Note
目つきの悪さを除けば金パツにツインテールと、意外と 美少女のひよ里。
過去に一度、見知らぬ者に声をかけられたことがある。
気が立っていたのか「っさいわ　ハゲ！」と無下に突っ ぱね平子たちが戦慄を覚えた。

dont worry about trying to translate it in a way an american could understand
infact the more literal and raw japanese someone can translate it as the better

[StonerPenguin]

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誕生日・・・８月１日
Birthday -- August 1st
身長・・・１３３ｃｍ
Height -- 133 cm
体重・・・２６ｋｇ
Body weight -- 26 kg

HIYORI SARUGAKI
猿柿ひよ里◆さるがき　ひより◆

人間と
死神を嫌う
短気な少女
She's a short-tempered girl who hates both Shinigami and humans.

EDIT; I got your email. I will translate the rest now, I didn't finish it earlier because I was busy

八重歯がチャームポイントと言い張る気性の荒い少女。
A rough/rude girl who insists her best quality is messed up teeth (double tooth)
口が悪く、ことあるごとに「ハゲ」を連発する。
She's foul-mouthed, and spouts "baldy" at every opportunity.
一護に特訓を施す際は何かと衝突するが、面倒見のいい 部分も稀に見せる。
She often fights with Ichigo when giving him intensive training, but she has a helpful side she rarely shows.

Comic panel showing Hiyori slapping Shinji;
Hiyori; なにモタクサしてんねんがしんたれが！！！ What the hell is taking so long you good-for-nothing!!
[T/N; Hiyori talks in a Kansai accent, I'm not 100% sure what she says, got that translation elsewhere. The only thing I know for sure is がしんたれ = "good-for-nothing; coward" in Kansai-ben]

Shinji; スンマセッ！！！ I'm sorry!!

Sorry, I'm not doing anymore.