is this correct

[LolitaLover]

Konnichiwa O genki desu ka watashi wa michael desu
Lolita's ga suki da
Doozo yoroshiku

Hello How do you do? i am michael and i really like Lolita's
nice to meet you

is that correct and i mean lolita's as in the fashion

[ItalianLeather]

[Harold]

Yes. It's right. However, your English is wrong. It's "Lolitas," not "Lolita's."

[LolitaLover]

cool thanks, i could just say like
Konnichiwa O genki desu ka
Anatawa kawaii desu
watashi wa michael desu

to a lolita

[anrakushi]

it is too straight forward if you ask me. also i think you should be more specific and say lolita fashion.. not just lolita. i feel uncomfortable enough reading what you said, im sure you would make a japanese girl feel uncomfortable also.

btw you should write watashi wa michael desu with 'ha' and not 'wa' to be correct.

[LolitaLover]

Originally Posted by anrakushi

it is too straight forward if you ask me. also i think you should be more specific and say lolita fashion.. not just lolita. i feel uncomfortable enough reading what you said, im sure you would make a japanese girl feel uncomfortable also.

btw you should write watashi wa michael desu with 'ha' and not 'wa' to be correct.

yeah thanks i just didn't know the word for fashion

:3

[anrakushi]

ロリータ・ファッション - Lolita Fashion. sounds similar to the english. 'Rorita fasshon'

[Harold]

Originally Posted by LolitaLover

cool thanks, i could just say like
Konnichiwa O genki desu ka
Anatawa kawaii desu
watashi wa michael desu

to a lolita

I don't know if I would say that second line of Japanese to someone as soon as you met them.

[junkomi]

ogenkidesuka is odd when you meet a person for the first time.
hajimemashite is the correct greeting word in the situation.