English to Japanese translation help!

[areazel]

So I spent a month in Japan over the summer, with a group, and spent ten days in a home stay. And I would really like to write a thank you note to the family, but I am not fluent enough in Japanese to write one. So I was wondering if I could have some help.

Dear Host Family,
Thank you so much for letting me stay with you during the home stay. I will never forget the time I spent with you. Words cannot explain how much I have appreciated your hospitality. Even though my time here was short, you are like family to me now. I hope that we can keep in touch. I also hope to visit you again in the future. Thank you so much.
From, Chloe

someone told me it was this (but they're not sure):
ホストファミリーのみなさんへ、

にほんに　たいざいちゅうは　たいへん　おせわに　な りました。 いっしょに　すごしたときの　ことは　けっして　わす れません。 みなさんから　うけた　おもてなしに　たいする　かん しゃの　きもちは ことばでは　いいつくせません。　きかんは　みじかか ったのですが　いまでは　みなさんが　わたしの かぞくの　ように　かんじて　います。これからも　お たよりを　こうかん　しましょう。　そして　しょうら い　また みなさんの　ところに　おじゃましたいと　おもって　 います。　
ほんとうに　ありがとう　ございます。

[KyleGoetz]

It feels good to me: Certain parts seem very well written (and perhaps overly formal), but I'm not at a high enough level to say it's all correct. I almost want to ask if a native speaker did the translation for you, but I'm sure a native speaker would come here and call me an idiot for missing some obvious grammar mistake in the translation

One thing to note: it will hurt the eyes of someone to read a 100% hiragana letter that uses spaces, too. I found it very, very difficult to read what you have posted because of the spaces and because there's nothing but hiragana.

I'll provide a kanji version of what you've written:

日本に滞在中は大変のお世話になりました。

一緒に過ごしたときのことは決して忘れません。みなさ んから受けたおもてなしに対する感謝の気持ちは言葉で は言いつくせません。

期間は短かったのですが今では皆さんが私の家族のよう に感じています。これからもお便りを交換しましょう。 そして将来また皆さんのところにお邪魔したいと思って います。

本当にありがとうございます。

I'm thinking it should be ございました at the end, though. We'll see what better speakers than I think!

[areazel]

Thanks so much!