Retail Japanese help

[masaegu]

Originally Posted by TerenceLau

What is the word for hem or hemming? How would you say "our store doesn't have a hemming service" or something similar to that regard?

「すそ上げ」 is the word.

「当店ではすそ上げは行なっておりません。」

For tonight the shopping mall is having a fashion event. My store is giving out 40% off of the most expensive regularly priced item (within the transaction), then 25% off for the rest of the regular price items.

Here's my take on it. Please lend me help correcting my sentence and making it natural sounding. I'd much appreciate if you could provide any easier way of conveying the message.

一番高い正価の商品が４０パーセントを割引していただ けます。その他の正価の商品が２５パーセントを割引し ていただけます。

The biggest problem with your phrases is that you are saying that it is the addressee (the customer), not your store, who is giving the discounts.

「していただけます」　＞＞＞　「させていただきます 」

「まとめ買いをされるお客様には、定価の最も高い商品 を４０％ＯＦＦにて、さらにその他の商品を全て定価の ２５％ＯＦＦにて販売させていただきます。」

[TerenceLau]

Sorry for the late response but it helped a lot! I didn't think I pulled the entire sentence flawlessly but I definitely got the point across by providing the essential parts of the sentence. Thank you!

[TerenceLau]

Right now my company is starting to utilize e-receipts. I assume it's to go green and save paper, etc. We are thinking of creating a slip of paper for them to fill out their name and e-mail address in the beginning of transaction.

環境のために、レシートをお客様の電子メールへ送りま す。

名前：
電子メール：

Does it look okay? Any appropriate fixes perhaps? Thank you in advance.

[masaegu]

Originally Posted by TerenceLau

Right now my company is starting to utilize e-receipts. I assume it's to go green and save paper, etc. We are thinking of creating a slip of paper for them to fill out their name and e-mail address in the beginning of transaction.

環境のために、レシートをお客様の電子メールへ送りま す。

名前：
電子メール：

Does it look okay? Any appropriate fixes perhaps? Thank you in advance.

I made corrections on the sentence in the other thread.

You do NOT call your customers' names 「名前」.　Use an honorific. Customer is king for Japanese speakers.

[TerenceLau]

「御名前」ですか？　そうですね。　ありがとうござい ます。

[masaegu]

Originally Posted by TerenceLau

「御名前」ですか？　そうですね。　ありがとうござい ます。

「お」の方がよいと思います。