Japanese translation help please?

munzy · (#1 (**permalink**))

Hello, I' m doing problems to translate this, someone could help me please?

CONCERTで駆け抜けて来た今年の集大成を
見せれるように世界を構築して行きたい
心の底から歌いたい (I want to listen from the bottom of my heart)
通過点にはしたくない燃え尽きるくらい歌ってみせる
やるぜ～LOVE SONG徠LOVE SONG！！！

PS: why in concert , they put the title of the song example:

BLUE SKY X BLUE SKY ? They use "X" but what mean repeat 2 times the title ?

Thanks a lot for any help! m(_ _)m

KyleGoetz · (#2 (**permalink**))

Why can't I find these lyrics anywhere online? Is this really a Japanese song? Here's my attempt:

I want to construct a world in order to be able to show [you?] a compilation of this year, which we ran through in concerts ("in concert"? I'm not sure what meaning "CONCERT" takes when used in all-caps English, 音楽会 or 一緒に).

I want to sing from the bottom of my heart.

I will show you my singing done to the extent that I will exhaust myself [and something about the waypoint I don't know]

LET'S DO IT, LOVE SONG LOVE SONG (not sure what that lone kanji between "LOVE SONG"s is doing there)

This has to be some kind of visual kei song, right? This reminds me why I hate it so much.

munzy · (#3 (**permalink**))

Thanks for the help.

I did not understood well this 'waypoint' (no even in english, what it mean exaclty)

but in general I think it's ok now I can see what it talks about it.

But why you think it's visual kei song?

about the "x" like for example the :
BLUE SKY x BLUE SKY ? 's title?

JohnBraden · (#4 (**permalink**))

waypoint is a point along the way.... to somewhere

munzy · (#5 (**permalink**))

Oh, thank you... a point from somewhere ...

KyleGoetz · (#6 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by munzy

Thanks for the help.

I did not understood well this 'waypoint' (no even in english, what it mean exaclty)

but in general I think it's ok now I can see what it talks about it.

But why you think it's visual kei song?

about the "x" like for example the :
BLUE SKY x BLUE SKY ? 's title?

The lyrics just seem so over-the-top poeticism. Who sings the song? I couldn't find the lyrics anywhere online.

munzy · (#7 (**permalink**))

over the top poeticy? Why you think so?

I take causal text from my friend's diary notes, so it's not on internet! I just use other people's sentences to translate to become better in translation and try to understand...

over the top of poeticy... I wonder how to capture these feelings from sentences.. I cannot see it this

KyleGoetz · (#8 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by munzy

over the top poeticy? Why you think so?

I take causal text from my friend's diary notes, so it's not on internet! I just use other people's sentences to translate to become better in translation and try to understand...

over the top of poeticy... I wonder how to capture these feelings from sentences.. I cannot see it this

I'm just saying that if the English translation were the original language, people would say it looks like a young person with an image in his head of what good writing is supposed to look like, trying to imitate it. Perhaps a bit too hard.

I wouldn't have been so critical if I knew it was just a random diary writing. I thought it came from a pop song or something. And I think most pop music is just a string of cliches and vapid expressions.

It's OK for a random person to write like this, but I don't think it's OK for someone who makes millions of dollars a year to write like that.

So please forgive me for my criticism.

munzy · (#9 (**permalink**))

Sorry my late reply I'm always so busy

Don't worry, it was just my curiosity, I don't think at all that it was a criticism from you.

I like to listen what other people think, so I asked for first !
Thanks always for the help!

Troya · (#10 (**permalink**))

Please somebody help me to understand these Japanese caracters, I been trying everything but finally I think I came to the right place. Thanks for your kind help
Juan