How are these Star Fox 64 quote translations?

Oben · (#1 (**permalink**))

Star Fox 64/Script dump/ja-en comparison - LLTVG

Wolf-そうはさせるか！スターフォックス！！ (As if I'd let you do that, Star Fox!)

Leon-アンドルフ様がお前らを倒せとさ (Emperor Andorf has ordered us to dispose of you.)

Pigma-ひさしぶりやなぁペッピー！(It's been awhile, Peppy!)

Pigma-お前らの首にかかった賞金はわてらのもんや (After I take your heads, we'll get the rewards.)

Andrew-アンドルフ様の敵は私の敵だ！覚悟しろ！ (The enemy of Emperor Andorf is also my enemy! Prepare yourself!)

Wolf-遊びは終わりだスターフォックス！ (Playtime's over, Star Fox!)

Leon-たっぷり　いたぶってから料理してやる！ (I will tease you plenty before I cook you.)

Pigma-地獄で親父が待ってるそうや！ (I hear your dad's waiting in Hell!)

Andrew-我々に逆らった事を後悔させてやる！ (You will regret ever having opposed us!)

Leon-たっぷり、かわいがってやる！ (I will be very sweet to you!)

Andrew-お前達は門前払いだ (We will not let you through!)

Wolf-図にのるなよスターフォックス！！ (Don't push your luck, Star Fox!!)

Leon-ボウヤこの新しいオモチャで遊んであげよう (Little boy, I will play with you using this new toy.)

Pigma-親父と同じでお前も甘いヤツやのう (You're too soft like your dad, boy!)

Andrew-下等動物がアンドルフ様に会えると思ったか (You lower animals thought you could meet Emperor Andorf?)

Wolf-地獄で親父が待ってるそうだ！！ (Looks like your dad's waiting for you in Hell!!)

Pigma--ペッピー　昔の仲間のよしみで楽にしたろ (For our old times, I'll put you to sleep. Peppy old pal.)

Pigma-こいつは、わてからのおごりや！受け取りや (I've got a treat for you! Here you go!)

Leon-こざかしいトリめ私の前にひざまずけ！ (You will kneel before me, you annoying bird!)

Wolf-さすがだよ言う事ねえしかし　そこまでだ (Well done! You're good, like I thought. But it's the end of the line for you!)

Leon-まだまだ　お楽しみはこれからだ！ (It is not over yet. This party has just started!)

Pigma-無駄や！こいつには大金をつぎ込んどるんや (No use! I put lots of cash in this.)

Leon-私を撃ち落とせるならやってみなさい (Please, take a chance. Shoot me down.)

Andrew-どこまでも　我々に逆らう気か！！ (How stubborn! You continue to oppose us!!)

Pigma-わてを撃ち落とそうなんて甘い奴やのう！ (Trying to shoot me down? You little brat!)

Andrew-恐くはない! 振り切ってやる！！ (I am not afraid! You will not strike me!!)

Wolf-オレ様に後ろを取らせるとは　落ちろ！(To think you let yours truly get behind you. Die!)

Leon-フッ！噂ほどでもない落ちろ (Hmph! You did not live up to the rumors. Die!)

Pigma-その首もらったでぇ！賞金はいただきや！ (I'll get your head now! Time for my reward!)

Andrew-落ちろー！アンドルフ様の為にも (Die! Emperor Andorf will be pleased, too.)

Wolf-キツネごときが調子にのるなよ！ (You're just a fox. Don't go overboard!)

Andrews-カエルは泳いでいればいいんだ！ (Frogs like you should stick to swimming!)

Wolf-このオレがやられるとは・・・！ (I lost!...)

Leon-この私が・・・・この私がーっ！！ (I....I have [lost]!!)

Pigma-わての　わての賞金がブヒ～！！ (My, my reward~oink~!!)

Wolf-ばっばかな　俺よりも上なのか・・・・ (No, no way! You're better than me?....)

Leon-つっ、強すぎる (He is too strong!)

Pigma-なんやと！？このわてが・・・ (What!? I [lost]...)

Wolf-残念だったな！スターフォックス (Too bad! Star Fox.)

Pigma-残念やったなぁ！スターフォックス (Hard luck! Star Fox.)

Andrew-ざまあみろ！スターフォックス (It serves you right! Star Fox.)

RadioKid · (#2 (**permalink**))

>Wolf-そうはさせるか！スターフォックス！！ (As if I'd let you do that, Star Fox!)

(you can not do it, Star Fox!)

>Pigma-地獄で親父が待ってるそうや！ (I hear your dad's waiting in Hell!)
(in Osaka dialect)

>Wolf-地獄で親父が待ってるそうだ！！ (Looks like your dad's waiting for you in Hell!!)

(I hear your dad's waiting in Hell!)
(in standard Japanese)

Oben · (#3 (**permalink**))

What about Leon and Andrew?

RadioKid · (#4 (**permalink**))

For other lines, you did very good job!

Oben · (#5 (**permalink**))

Are any of the translations too formal?