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My 1st manga page(online) - 02-07-2008, 08:02 PM
This is da 1st manga page I have put on the internet. Most of it was done by hand. I did da panels & stuff on painter... I dont have adobe photoshop or mangastudio. Im not so gud @ coloring. Please post any comments, tips, or other stuff on my manga page! thank u! Please rate it on a scale of 1-10(10=highest,1= lowest)!!!img001.jpg

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!!!!!!!!!!! - 02-07-2008, 08:10 PM
WOW! You're good!
Well, I can't rate you, but I can say you're really good!


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WOW! You're good!
Well, I can't rate you, but I can say you're really good!
Thanks a buch!!! I love gettin' positive feedback for my art it makes me feel proud of my work!!

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02-07-2008, 08:39 PM
i like it. its really well made. you should make the white wings feathers a little longer and smooth, and for the black wing make it messy and wild. i think that would show the two different sides a little better. i like the the coloring. it really goes well.

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i like it. its really well made. you should make the white wings feathers a little longer and smooth, and for the black wing make it messy and wild. i think that would show the two different sides a little better. i like the the coloring. it really goes well.
okies thank u!

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02-07-2008, 08:54 PM
wow this is good the detail is quite nice
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wow this is good the detail is quite nice
Thanks!! I luv getting comments & tips!

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That's really good. I like it. Do you know what it's gonna be called?
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That's really good. I like it. Do you know what it's gonna be called?
So far, the name of "Love's wings"
why:
da 2 main characters later fall in love. Since, they wur born dring da time when a war btwn gods & demons is going on, they cant b together...
If dey can get da war 2 end, only den will dey b 2gether. So basically its loves wings b/c 2 me wings represent an angel which is a sign of hope, so its like hope's love...
(thats a long explination....>.<"

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Title page - 02-08-2008, 05:44 PM
Lookies I added a title page, ima try 2 color it using da skools adobe photoshop!!!pic02002.jpg

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