Anyone want to show off song-writing or poetry?

[InuSan]

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

WOW! I think some of our best creativity comes from our pain.

i agree with you...i wrote that after the guy i liked got a gf and decided to treat me like crap...
that was a few days ago

[InuSan]

Originally Posted by Kajitsu

Wow... I like that.

thanks

i had my heart ripped out and that inspired me

[MitcheruOtaku]

Originally Posted by InuSan

those are good...i love the first one

Thanks.

[InuSan]

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

Thanks.

any time :] im not very creative that just popped into my head one day

[MitcheruOtaku]

Here's another one:

Being Invisible



I stand
in a room
You wave
I wave back
you run to greet
someone behind me
I'm invisible

I start to talk to you
You look through my skull
at someone across the room
I'm invisible

I'm invisible
Why don't you see me?
Why can't you hear me?
I guess you want me
Invisible.

[InuSan]

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku

Here's another one:

Being Invisible



I stand
in a room
You wave
I wave back
you run to greet
someone behind me
I'm invisible

I start to talk to you
You look through my skull
at someone across the room
I'm invisible

I'm invisible
Why don't you see me?
Why can't you hear me?
I guess you want me
Invisible.

holy crap! thats good :}
i think that describes me and the guy i liked...

[MitcheruOtaku]

Thanks- Story of my life lol!
I write alot of these down just kinda flows out.

[InuSan]

this isnt to much of poetry
but here

carbon monoxide

silently killing you-
get into you with little warning
and as it leaves you slowly die

i didnt want to love you
but then i did
i tried my hardest to get you to return it
but nothing worked
when i found out that it was all just a dream
you were like carbon monoxide
you entered my life and
with those simple words you were gone

you will never know how much i felt for you
nor will you ever know
why out of everyone
you were wrapped around my heart

just like carbon monoxide
you entered with out notice
and left me here to die

[InuSan]

same with me...i just try to not relive them so i dont write em down
usually they are depressing

[MitcheruOtaku]

WOW! I like you 'Carbon Monoxide' poem!
Yeah, alot of mine are from the pain of ending a relationship or remembering...

Chains



Chains pull me
down
drag me low
to the ground
My face in mud
I hear laughing
looking down at
me

Each time I try
to get back up,
the chains
pull tighter still

Back into the
cold slime
I cannot breathe
I feel heels
stabbing,
pushing on my
back
Down boy,
stay down, boy
Good boy.

Chains are pulling me
down.

by Mitcheru Lee