Yes Juliet, You Must Die...

MaymeRachael · (#1 (**permalink**))

What do you get
When you parade yourself around
Like a girl of misfortune
Playing with the hearts of men
You're soon to get caught
Wrapped up in the trouble
Clawing at the walls
Of your own heart

Fall upon the floor
Crying tears of regret
The past is catching up with you
Hide behind lies
Await the demise
Knocking at your door

Watch the ones
That you have come to love
Fall apart like ash between your fingers
Blame no one but yourself
Your actions caused the result

Drink your poison
Close your eyes
Let your priest become your angel of death
Awake to find your trick gone horribly wrong
Your love lay cold
Like the heart inside your chest
Grab the dagger
Turn off the drream
Run into the shadows
Goodbye...

So, what'd ya think? ^_~

laurengl88 · (#2 (**permalink**))

that's pretty intense. I'm impressed. The organization of it works very well. *thumbs up*

MaymeRachael · (#3 (**permalink**))

Aw, ^_^ Thank you for the compliment!

laurengl88 · (#4 (**permalink**))

You're welcome.

I love poetry.

MaymeRachael · (#5 (**permalink**))

I've got some more around here...somewhere! >_<'

QuoyaNatsume · (#6 (**permalink**))

Woot!! Go Rach

It really got my attention.
Scene inside my head which was like this: You're 1 of the town girls who has been observing Juliets tristes(meeting btwn lovers or ppl who just wanna do "it".) And got scorned by the guy she was in love with, that Juliet was sleeping around with, because he didn't you anymore b'cause he is now infatuated w/ Juliet.End scene: lol
So thats how I see this poem, embodying her hate for Juliet. Do you have more???

MaymeRachael · (#7 (**permalink**))

They're floating around in my head all I need to do is write them down a post them here! ^_^

tifa · (#8 (**permalink**))

wooo hoo nice!!!!!!!!!!!!! yes she must die then carried a poor boy down with her...grrrr bad girl....

oh romeo where are thou romeo..
he is dead my lady dead to this world for juliet took him into the after land
no it cant be! not my romeo that you claim 2 see not him my prince of love
your mistaken...you mus be!!!

my lady ....my queen ....romeo has left with juliet drank of poison...stab of heart
into the after life their love shall not part

how dare you! u foolish man romeo loved me that was the plan! marry me he said
and bare of my seed..romeo...how could you leave.....

see thats what the sain woman was left sayin...

MaymeRachael · (#9 (**permalink**))

^_^'
Maybe I should write ones that all deal w/ Shakespear works! ^_~

QuoyaNatsume · (#10 (**permalink**))

lol
It's like 18th century or w.eva century, soap operas