My manga first draft

chaseme · (#1 (**permalink**))

Ive been working on my manga and have finish 11pages of drafts
I want to know if the flow of events is understandable by other people or not.

please don't mind the crappy dialogs and art. I already know they suck

Perspective and panel layout suggestions are welcome

chaseme · (#2 (**permalink**))

Chapter 2

zubakusugar · (#3 (**permalink**))

I think the flow is great, and you've variation with the perspectives. Just one thing is that you almost got the same panel-style through the second chapter, could look more nice if you varied them as you did in the beginning. Nice work!

swords · (#4 (**permalink**))

haha so funny

SamuraiAlchemistNinja · (#5 (**permalink**))

Nice work! I think it's cute and funny! =)

chaseme · (#6 (**permalink**))

Added missing page 7

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could look more nice if you varied them as you did in the beginning. Nice work!

thx for the comment now that you mention it, my first chapter i made by panel layouts and adlib on the dialogs in my second chapter i wrote the dialogs and adlib on the panel layout.
will be working on my 2nd draft as soon as i get used to my genius graphic tablet.
***on a side note dont get genius graphics tablet. worth 1/3 of wacom bamboo but the performance really s***

Tsuyako · (#7 (**permalink**))

That was really cool

keep it up!

zubakusugar · (#8 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by chaseme

Added missing page 7

thx for the comment now that you mention it, my first chapter i made by panel layouts and adlib on the dialogs in my second chapter i wrote the dialogs and adlib on the panel layout.
will be working on my 2nd draft as soon as i get used to my genius graphic tablet.
***on a side note dont get genius graphics tablet. worth 1/3 of wacom bamboo but the performance really s***

aha ^^
i've got a wacom tablet intous (A4 something) and it was truly worth the
money. But the smaller ones are just as good as the bigger in my opinion.

MissMisa · (#9 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by zubakusugar

aha ^^
i've got a wacom tablet intous (A4 something) and it was truly worth the
money. But the smaller ones are just as good as the bigger in my opinion.

I really wanted an Intous one but too expensive for me ;_; I have a Bamboo, I used to have the old Volito 2! When I get better though, I'm planning to invest in a better one ^_^

Oh and your Manga is great Chaseme! Very funny and great characters and camera angles

zubakusugar · (#10 (**permalink**))

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I really wanted an Intous one but too expensive for me ;_; I have a Bamboo, I used to have the old Volito 2! When I get better though, I'm planning to invest in a better one ^_^

Oh and your Manga is great Chaseme! Very funny and great characters and camera angles

yeah they're >< I regret a little that I bought the A4 one, because it's too
huge to bring along when I travel etc. I would recommend the A5, because
it has the same functions as the A4, but are smaller and more practical.
(and much cheaper) :3