Post a poem!!! - Page 53

nobora · (#521 (**permalink**))

As I watch you From near by
My heart skips a beat
and all i see is you
But you dont see me
Not until I get the courage to tell you
My feelings for you

VampireGirl1314 · (#522 (**permalink**))

the heavens are opening up to me
i fall to my feet
blood flooding out my mouth
you take the knife out
i cover my mouth
then one last time i finally scream
fall down and hit the floor
you kiss me goodbye
and you will see me no more.

you killed my life
you killed my spirit
you killed my time
and you proved it
now its time
for me to do it
i will give you time
i will lift your spirit
i wont kill your life
and this is how I'll prove it.

you have been waiting for me
but i have been waiting for you
i just haven't had time to see you
you have been away so this is all i can say
you and me are just the same
the passion we share is exciting
this energy you give me might just kill me
but its so sweet that i just cant stay away.

sakari09 · (#523 (**permalink**))

wow....so sad...TT.TT

I'll post my new one tomorrow.

VampireGirl1314 · (#524 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by sakari09

wow....so sad...TT.TT

I'll post my new one tomorrow.

lolz thanks.xD

darksyndrem · (#525 (**permalink**))

The Chat Poem
Volume 1

If you build your heaven,
You find your hell
If you destroy your hell,
You keep on living well
But only time will tell,
never go to the wishing well
Your life would be at stake,
to make such a mistake as that
So take your time,
to make a dime
And into your heart,
will I shoot my dart
Back to the place,
So we can be us
We must stay in the race,
You have my trust
And 'till death's door,
May I be yours
And with my all honesty,
I tell you thee,
We---will be.
Free to the end to fight and defend,
Fly away and feel okay.

Contributers
VampireGirl1314
KikiBunny23
Yuusuke
Darksyndrem

VampireGirl1314 · (#526 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by darksyndrem

The Chat Poem
Volume 1

If you build your heaven,
You find your hell
If you destroy your hell,
You keep on living well
But only time will tell,
never go to the wishing well
Your life would be at stake,
to make such a mistake as that
So take your time,
to make a dime
And into your heart,
will I shoot my dart
Back to the place,
So we can be us
We must stay in the race,
You have my trust
And 'till death's door,
May I be yours
And with my all honesty,
I tell you thee,
We---will be.
Free to the end to fight and defend,
Fly away and feel okay.

Contributers
VampireGirl1314
KikiBunny23
Yuusuke
Darksyndrem

here is the score on our poem okay guys?

ome of the lines seemed forced, but other then that it's good. 4/5 for the flow of the poem, 4/5 for the message, and 4/5 for the image that the poem sets in my mind

i wont say who scored this because its a secret.xD

Gerlandox · (#527 (**permalink**))

LOL
you really own this thread dont you
Well ok
Ill just post a quick improvised one
Just 4 fun

Lost

My shining star has fade`t away, I`m lost,
cant find my way,
to the angels I pray
Would i find her anyway,
Would my pain go away?
Fuck it ...
I never believed in angels anyway...

Gerland

Gerlandox · (#528 (**permalink**))

Ah and sorry 4 the inappropriate word I used.

but Hey this is Art, they are no rules no recipes

HungryForRamen · (#529 (**permalink**))

Mind if I post a song instead? Pretty much like a poem but with a chorus.

pumpum · (#530 (**permalink**))

heres my own masterpiece !!

i have called it "Me1 Girlfriend Nil"

My girlfriend called me a twerp
Cuz, i did a very loud burp,
she took her eyes off her tea,
i quickly slipped in a bogie...
and watched her drink it down with a slurp !!