The poems I said I would post...

[Hisuwashi]

Elementary my dear Rikku. I am just a natural!

J/K... domo arigatou gozaimasu!


I love your poem Mu! great work!!

And that is a great piece of work by Shakespeare, Twisted... Hm, Henry V... I'm afraid I'm not familiar with that one. Perhaps I should resolve to read it.

[musashi]

Love At All

Though thought knows best
Though time knows distance
Though eyes may see all
But what may seem too far
Too long
Don't know love at all

Though sun knows shine
Though water knows call
Though everything knows place
But what may seem in order
In spot
Don't know love at all

Though pillow knows sleep
Though dark knows pall
Though moon knows sleepless night
But what may seem at peace
At lull
Don't know love at all

Though mind knows want
Though soul knows fall
Though heart may know the rest
But what may seem not to know
Not to con
May know love in all

[lpdirufangirl09]

would it be okay if i posted some of my poems on here??

[musashi]

but of course! no need to ask dear!

[lpdirufangirl09]

thank you!

here's the first one. i have quite a few. if i get good feedback i'll post more.

they go in a chronological order, along with the relationship that "inspired" it.


my LOVE____________________
Walk up behind me
Put your hands around my waist
Kiss me on my cheek
And put a smile upon my face
Whisper in my ear
And say three simple words
Tell me that youre mine
And how you think my insecurities are absurd
Bring over your guitar
And sing to me when Im ill
Kiss me in the cold, pouring rain
And watch time stand still
Wipe away my tears
And pick me up when I fall
Make me a promise
To be there when I call
Be my only one,
My very best friend
And lets ride into the sunset
Until the very end

[lpdirufangirl09]

Everytime You Lie_____________________________
Smash your fist into the wall
now I think we've been thought it all
it's midnight and I'm crying again
we've had this fight too many times
over what's wrong and who's right
and everytime, it tears me down

you never had to make excuses
you didn't have to lie
all you had to say is, baby, this is goodbye
but you know

I could never let you go
no matter how many times I cry
I fall deeper and deeper in love with you
everytime you lie

I should really hate you right now
but it wouldn't feel right
I only want to be with you more
everytime you lie

it's been four months and I'm over you
for the first time I feel so free
and I can do what I want to do
but then you come back around
and you look into my eyes
you bring me back to those memories
and I realize

I could never let you go
no matter how many times I cry
I fall deeper and deeper in love with you
everytime you lie
I should really hate you right now
but it wouldn't feel right
I only want to be with you more
everytime you lie

[AoshiShinomori]

It's been a month since Mu mu posted here ;_;.... Supersis!!!!!!!!!! Post a poem quick. It's definitely time for one now ^_^