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03-26-2008, 09:09 PM

芸術家
礼泣

物が儲けない
何は?
君を眠てとき、 其のの言葉を分かる?
頭に聞てくれ
今歩きだすよ
大切な人が儲けない
芸術家は君の名前を知らない
夢を止まれ
心に言付けて
愛は全てでわない
幸せと言う子守歌
幾つ君は涙を流したら すなおに分かる?
此の芸術家を愛しってた
でも君の名前を知らった
圧すてだったね?
けど 愛しってたで芸術家
君に来まったで風
然して去らたで風も
今歩きだすよ
芸術家こと思いない
愛は全てでわない
此れ知る
此れ分かる
物が儲けないは
往事に今
夢を止まれ
For your own sake


English translation:
Artist
By Reina

The thing you can’t have
What is it?
When you’re sleeping, do you understand those words?
Listen to your head
Now you’ll move on
The precious person you can’t have
The artist doesn’t know your name
Stop dreaming!
Send a message to your heart
“Love isn’t everything”
It’s a lullaby called happiness
How many tears must you shed
Before you understand?
You loved this artist
But he didn’t know your name
Overwhelming, wasn’t it?
But you loved because of the artist
He came to you by the wind
And left by the wind as well
Now you move on
Don’t think about the artist
Love isn’t everything
You know this
You understand this
The thing you can’t have
Is in the past now
Stop dreaming
For your own sake


Looking for feedback! Please make corrections...I know there must be mistakes...


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03-26-2008, 09:15 PM

Wow ur poetry is amazing I like it...Ur really talented keep it up*winks and gives thumbs up*


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03-26-2008, 09:18 PM

Oh, arigatou gozaimasu!!! Thanks a lot!! Here's another one, since you asked. =)

Written: 2007 June 3 Tuesday

"Blame Fear"

Don't want to change a thing
Don't want it all to stay the same
Can't move; I'm paralyzed
I've got only fear to blame
Just a smile, just a laugh
A way to cry without the tears
No courage to get it back
Just stuck here blaming my fear
You'll turn in here
I'll keep on going
Run away to come home
Never even knowing
That what I need is never there
'Cause I'm always looking elsewhere
Someday I'll find it in my hair
All the reasons why I shouldn't care
But I'll just blame my fear
And get on with my life
Questioning all; what if, what if
Things had gone on right
Please, I plead, I beg
Make things right
But courage isn't my strongpoint
So I'll just blame fear tonight


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03-26-2008, 09:20 PM

Wow u are good...I write 2 actually...my thread is in the same section just under yours


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03-26-2008, 09:25 PM

Okay, cool. ^_^
Here's another one!


R a i n b o w


Kochira wo kite! (Come this way!)
Let's make the whole world our coloring book
'Cause I wanna color the sky with you
You held out your hand
Helped me up to stand
So let's use those same fingers to paint a picture
Kochira wo kite! (Come this way!)
Niji wo tsukuyou! (Let's make a rainbow!)
Niji, niji, niji (rainbow, rainbow, rainbow)
Naiyou ni kiwotsunakute wo (Don't pay attention to the details/subject)
Just paint or color or draw out your kimochi! (feelings)
Words aren't enough, kakenai (we/you can't write)
So let's let out our colors
Soshite (and) "rainbow it up"!
Soshite (and) "rainbow it up"!
Kochira wo kite! (Come this way)
Niji wo tsukuyou! (Let's make a rainbow)
Let's make the sky green and the grass grow blue;
The tree trunks yellow and the snow purple, too.
Kyo kiseki wo tsukuyou (let's make a miracle today)
Soshite (and) "rainbow it up"!
Let out your colors, let them out!
Smile for a while, smile for a while
Paint me a rainbow
Give me a soul
Let the whole world have stripes and polka-dots
Splashes of red, drops of teal,
Smatters of pink, paint what you feel
Give life to this blank, bleak world!
Soshite (and) "rainbow it up"!
Kochira wo kite (come this way)
Soshite (and) "rainbow it up"!
Soshite niji wo tsukuyou! (and let's make a rainbow!)
Kyou yo (today!!)


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03-26-2008, 09:28 PM

Another hit ur drowning me with ur glorius talent....So Beautiful


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03-27-2008, 12:01 PM

...Thanks...?


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03-27-2008, 02:13 PM

I'm making this up off the top of my head, so..it might not be so good. Also, I don't write so much in english anymore...
"Fuminshyou" (Insomnia)

Can't fall asleep
In this endless night of broken dreams
Nerareranai {can't sleep}
I can not sleep
In this fateless world of broken dreams
The ill-contented, malcontented
Contempt and unrest
A trip and fall
You lose it all
Nerareranai {can't sleep}
Misette miseru {[how to translate this?] you're watching, you see}
Never close your eyes
You might miss something, ne? {right?}
Superficialness is violence's middle name
Koko ni nerareranai {I can't sleep here}
With all these broken promises
Itsumou Nerarerania darou {I'll probably never be able to sleep}


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03-27-2008, 02:20 PM

No...this is still awesome


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03-27-2008, 03:36 PM

Ah, I don't like it...I never like forced lines... If I could get on to my quizilla...

Here's a better one:

Oct 16, 2006
Turn To Dust

Temporary, like the rain
Lonely, like death
Reminding, like a stain

I'm afraid that if I touch you
You will turn to dust
But I fear you'll fall apart
If I don't, so I must

A world apart from ours
You linger there, from me
The place you are now
Is a place you cannot be

The things you thought you knew
Have all fallen away
The tears you've held on to
Make you fall where you lay

Why is it that evertime I reach for you
You glide slowly and fall?
Why is it that when you scream
You think you've lost it all?

An imperfection that's perfect
A seam that is split
Silver that cuts diamond
Ice that fire has lit

Burning, freezing, melting
Why do you turn to dust?
Flying, falling, stationary
Why is it me that you don't trust?

Wish that I could find
I can't yet I must
Wish that I could hold you
And you wouldn't turn to dust...


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