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Post a HAIKU - 02-15-2009, 04:01 AM

This is kinda a play off of the post a poem thread... In English or Japanese...

くらい そら
しずか な さけび
ぼく、 おちる
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02-15-2009, 04:20 AM

3 lines
17syllables
5;7;5

Gently the wind blew[5]
over the hills and mountains[7]
but to soon, it's gone[5]
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02-15-2009, 04:21 AM

Forum drama is
Nothing but hot air to most
Hit the ignore, please.


Fortunately, there is one woman in this world who can control me.

Unfortunately for you, she is not here.

Say what you want, but you can't break free
Say what you will, but you can't change me
Say what you want, but it all takes time...
And my love will know no end....
How I miss my beautiful friend.
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02-24-2009, 07:32 PM

Here's one that I wrote over a year ago. It's called Vivid.

Luck within my reach
Injustice and cowardice
End my vivid dream
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03-01-2009, 06:53 PM

Here's a poem a made in the cafeteria at lunch time. Their food sucks...

Oh no, it's lunch time!
I gag as the food goes down.
Nothing else to eat...
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03-01-2009, 07:22 PM

Quote:
Originally Posted by KikiBunny23 View Post
3 lines
17syllables
5;7;5

Gently the wind blew[5]
over the hills and mountains[7]
but to soon, it's gone[5]
Five, seven, then five
Syllabals mark a Haiku
Remarkable Oaf

Didn't write that mahself...I don't take credit.



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03-01-2009, 09:30 PM

I think haiku
are pointless but I had
to participate


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03-13-2009, 01:08 AM

Haiku are easy
but sometimes don't make sense
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05-02-2009, 11:16 AM

3 Haiku...

My Only Sunshine"

I live underground.
You are my only sunshine,
And I am a worm.


"Like a bird in flight."

Like a bird in flight,
Carried by the wind to the sun,
My feathers are singed.


"Twinkle"

I was very sad
When I looked up and realized
I could count the stars.



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05-02-2009, 01:42 PM

行き過ぎて Yuki sugi te (After passed by)
振り返って見る Furikaette miru (Looking back to)
君の家 Kimi no Ie (Your house)

With Some reason, He can not visit his girlfriend(to be)'s house. Then he pretend to be not interested in her house, passed by and look back to her house.


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