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Alastor 02-24-2009 07:30 PM

My Poems
 
Hey everyone!

I figured I could make my own topic here because I'll be posting quite a few. It's not that I'm egoistic and can't share a topic with others; in fact, you're free to post your own poems here! Maybe have some discussion about what they could mean, and stuff like that :) So here is the first poem. It's alled Aftermath.



Cold and thirsty
Insides squirming
Her eyes
Misty
Watery
She's starving
Rain is filthy
Toxic
Berries make her sick

Gone without a trace
Tattered clothing
On her skin
Wind whips her face
Blood trickling
Down her chin

Punished for prying
Authorities lying
Useless trying
Bleeding and dying
Wounded
Lost
Crying
Bombs above flying

She's not the only one
Millions around her
Similar story
They lost
The kings won
Millions around her
Abandoned and gory

Ypsilanti 02-24-2009 07:35 PM

i love it.
its very good.

Alastor 02-26-2009 02:40 PM

Thank you =)

Ahem, here is another entitled "Snow":

Outside this window
Everything is white
Winter's snow
Is a white sheet that lies
Even in the deep night
An unlit room is brighter
Winter's snow
Is a white sheet that lies
Even in the morning light
A snowy expanse is darker than dirt
Winter's snow
Is a white sheet that lies
Outside this window
Summer seems like a sweet fable
Winter's snow
Is a veil that hides our cries


and here is one entitled "By the tip of the third edge":

On early spring
I'm a late fall
Spinning sphere
In fright and spite I stand alone here
By myself
I have nothing
My dream, this wall
Come to fear
Chasing hymns I stand alone here
By myself

Spent my last gold
I've reached no goals
Drench the bowl
I steal my seeds before I die
By myself
Fightning speakers
Records screaming
Feed my soul
With stolen seeds before I die
By myself

The end, snowy
Mornings, breezy
Earthly songs
Insane chantings seem to find me
By myself
My eyes, streaming
Sunburst paintings
All my wrongs
Scrambled chorus seem to find me
By myself


I may have posted Snow before. But I couldn't find it, so I posted it again. I get my new computer today so I'm looking forward to writing a new poem! ^_^ Oh, and don't forget to share your poems! Brain fodder is nice :D

SuuriSatsugaisha 02-26-2009 03:07 PM

ur poems r really good! i liek'em so much *-*

tohruchan7 02-26-2009 07:26 PM

okay heres a poem i wrote if ya'll want to read??
To scared to know
To scared to show
To scared to try
To scared to hide
To frightened to cry...
and to die
Shaking and humming
up in her cradle
Thier she lies and finally cries...

Alastor 02-26-2009 07:32 PM

Scary poem o.O being too scared to show something and too scared to hide it at the same time makes me think of someone who is in an impossible situation. I like it :)


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