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02-28-2007, 04:17 PM

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Sorry, for making you cry, Sweetie, but Ex has got quite ill... i just came in-to e-cafe after the hospital to check up my e-mail and now i am heading back home to sleep, sleep and sleep some more, i'll try to be back on feet and on-line in the next couple of days...
sorry for letting you guys down...

Well, anywho... please kill Seth as cool as possible when the time comes, as I put my heart and soul in that damn character
I second that. Get well soon! (Cos I need you to continue this...XD) j/ks, but take care.
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03-01-2007, 01:11 AM

Aww Ex, it's ok! I was just joking. Get better ok? I think we'll keep him cool for the time being. *winks* But that's nmot sayin much for the future! lol. OK my time to write...


Charlie walked away knowing she had to kill Seth before Yamato or I could do anything. We followed her slightly behind, just out of sight of anything that could happen that would make us be seen. He had the sword. Ge had it the whole time. I only wish I knew all this earlier so I could ahve been ready when we got here but no, he had to be an a-hole anbd keep it to himself. But there was no time to think about that now. Charlie snuck up on him but he was ready to fight. He pulled out his gun and pointed it to her chest, right at the heart.
"So you think you can get the sword so easily, huh?" "No, I was expecting a little more out of you, Seth." I was expecting you to not put your gun until the end of the fight, that is, if you were still alive." Her voice was cold. The coldest I've ever heard it before. I knew that she was being serious. This girl was ready to fight til the death, literally. Yamato and I went and hid behind a doorway that his our bodies from the fight that was about to go down....


**sorry guys, kinda sick with my migrane still but I hope someone can pick up where i left off**


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03-01-2007, 01:48 AM

Seth punched Charlie right in the mouth and she went down hard, I had to help her, she wasnt going to win. I quickly jumped out but Seth was ready for me and he stabbed me with the sword, right in my side, I suddenly felt weak all over and I collapsed on the floor. He held the sword over his head to kill me bu Suzette had grabbed it out of his hand and ran away. She had the sword. As she ran Seth tried to shoot her but Charlie trew him into a wall before he could hit his mark. His gun fell out a window, and there was no espace out this window becuse we were on the 10th floor. Seth ran to the balcony and Charlie followed him, I could do nothing but watch. i couldnt move.

Seth grabbed her by the arm. "Ya know its funny, I used to get enjoyment in watching you roll on the grass, now I'm going to gte an enjoyment in you FALLING ONTO the grass." he said and he threw her over the side. We both thought she was dead, I picked up his gun and shot him. He was still alive, blood pouring out of him. I figured I had to shoot him again but then I saw a hand come up. It was Charlie. She grabbed his foot and threw him over the side to his death. Seth was gone, Suzette had the sword, this was he beginning of the end. I helped Charlie up and I collapsed again. I felt like I was dying. I spat up blood. I knew Suzette couldnt beat him even with the sword. I slowly got up holding my side. Charlie helped me walk to the throne room.

We had to find Suzette and help her...


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03-01-2007, 01:03 PM

I missed my own big fight scene. Oh well.

Charlie helped Yamato to sit on the only seat in the room, the throne. "Suzette." he said. Charlie looked at him, he was in pretty rough shape, nothing to serious but he was down for a little while. The castle seemed to but ominously empty. Where had everyone gone? "Suzette..." Yamato whispered trying to stand. Charlie had to do something, she needed to find Suzette but she couldn't leave Yamato alone here either. Yamato looked up at Charlie and whispered" Go, I'll be alright, Suzette you have to help her no matter what, she is the most important thing in my........" He had past out. Charlie bandaged what she could and wiped the blood off his mouth. She walked toward the door of the throne room and looked back to where Yamato sat slumped over. "I'll find Suzette and help her I promise, besides if I didn't You'd be pissed off at me wouldn't ya kid?" Charlie said to the unconsious boy.

She walked down what felt like an endless staircase and squinted as she stepped into the open air. She moved slowly around the castle staying close to the cold stone walls. As she came around the nearest corner she came upon Seth's body. She walked up to it not of her own accord. A gun was lying only two feet away from the dead man and Charlie bent to pick it up. She stood looking at the gun in her hand when the body twitched. In a split second Seth's hand was around her ankle. He was of no threat really, he lay there dying. "Hey little girl, *cough, cough* You know you were always my favorite...." "Do me a favor will ya, for old times sake." He was slurring. "Kill me......" He said staring at Charlie. Charlie simply lifted the gun, cocked it and pulled the trigger. A small spot of blood stained her cheek. She was numb, she stood staring for what felt like an eternity. Images bashing around in her head. AN image of Suzette and Yamato brought her back to reality. She had to go. She had to find Suzette, but how?...........


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03-01-2007, 01:37 PM

sorry fuu, didnt know when youd be back, but dont worry, that wasntyour big fight scene, that comes later... its your army against someone else ho i cant say whos yet


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03-01-2007, 04:48 PM

It's all good.....
My army??????????
Yay am I going to have minions???
Let me in on a little of it, please..........


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03-01-2007, 04:50 PM

The stroy is hard to follow...@_@ someone explain please?


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The stroy is hard to follow...@_@ someone explain please?
This is the second part. Try going back to the very begining and read the setting and then character bio's. Three travelling companions in a post apocoliptic world, two of which new each other prior to events. One bad guy has been defeated and now it seems the second has as well. We left off with Seth(bad guy) dead. Charlie is outside of the castle looking for Suzette who took off with the sword(needed to kill the king). Yamato is unconsious in throne room. Castle appears to be empty. Suzette is actually the daughter of the true King who was killed by his brother, King Raymond. Yamato and Suzette are in love and Charlie I guess is along for the ride. I hope that helps you a little???...!!!!!


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03-03-2007, 04:15 AM

I came to. I was in different place, I was in some sort of torture chamber. King Raymond was standing next to me and the guard he was wih was holding some sort of stick, as he got closer I noticed this stick was metal and was burning red, I pieced together what was happening in my mind. I was being interrogated, and I assume it wasnt going to be a pleasant one.

"I'm going to ask this once kid... wheres my niece with the sword?" he asked me. "I'll never tell you," i snapped. "You have courage, kid. But your love for her is your downfall." he singnalled to the guard to touch me with the metal rod, at first I didnt feel it, then the burning sensation crippled my whole body as I screamed in pain. "TELL ME! WHERE THE HELL IS SHE!?"

"Go to hell!" i answered. "This one has spunk, he loves her, its obvious. It will be his undoing. If you will not speak of her whereabouts, then die, I hereby sentance this piece of trash be hanged at dusk tonite!"

I spent my last few hours in a cell... believe it or not I was smiling, I prevented Raymond from capturing her, I'd gladly sacrifice myself for her. Finally it time came for me to die. I was led to the gallows. I wasnt scared, I was doing this to keep suzette alive.

What happned next shocked even me...

***finally I'm the one whos gonna be saved, at least I hope so lol***


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03-03-2007, 06:09 PM

I ran up to the gallows and I swiftly took out the sword and killed the guards that where hold Yamato. I made sure I didn't hit him because I was going to need him to help me fight King Raymond's army. I looked at him for a quick second and smiled. For once, I finally saved him and he wasn't saving me. "Your welcome" I said to him. "Hey love doves!" King Raymond yelled to us. "Prepare to die together against my army!"

He summoned his army and suddenly about 500 men came around a corner. I knew this was probably going to end roughly. But I kept my hopes up. All I had to do really was kill King Raymond and then the battle would be over, but I was going to save that until the end. As the men came closer to us, I realized Charlie was still missing. I looked around and didn't see her. I turned to Yamato.

"Where's Charlie?" I asked him. I looked around and still no sign of her. I started to get frightened. “I don’t know. But don’t worry she’ll be here. She always comes in late.” Yamato said trying to make me forget that we might be killed but these men. I smiled slightly but I knew it was hopeless for us. Two people cannot possibly take on 500 men with only one sword and a gun. The chances for us surviving were slim to none. I knew that we both had to try our hardest to win, no matter what the cost. I started towards the men. Yamato followed. Out of the corner of my eye I saw Charlie come running in with about 350 men.

“Charlie! Holy shit! Where the hell did you get all these guys!?” I yelled at her. She just simply smiled and charged into the men. Yamato and I gave each other one last kiss and started to fight too. In one swift move I took out at least 5 guys. I smiled. I never thought killing again would feel so good. Yamato started firing at random. He took down at least 30 guys a round. Charlie and her men took out the most men. King raymond was getting worried. He was watching him men fall like leaves as we pressed on into the crowd. The battle lasted about 30 minutes until Yamato, Charlie and I and about 300 of her men were still standing. I turned and smiled to all of them. it was a sweet victory. But I had to go and kill King Raymond. I ran over the bodies to yamato and gave him one last kiss good-bye. "I love you." I whispered to him. "If I don't get back, marry Charlie and take over the land ok? Promise me." I started to cry a little bit. Yamato gave me a hug and kissed me and said, "Don't worry. We're gonna rule the land together." I smiled and ran off to find and kill my uncle.


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Cuase I'll die without you.

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