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02-16-2007, 11:55 PM
*** Excessum will take fuu's story instead of mattholens one... right, so what do we have right now, everyon'es getting ready to leave hospital, Suzette can see ghosts along with Yamato now... *** btw fuu, good job!
 *** Ok, a short one from Excessum as he has to leave soon ***Everyone had their stuff packed and after getting in Charlies truck went on the road again... They drew down the hill back to the old church as Yamato told them that that was the shortest road to the mountains but after taking a turn behind one of the many ruined houses, something felt on the cars roof. Charlie lost control over her car and drew in-to a nearby wall, luckily a bush eased the impact. Suzette was the first one who rised her eyes and who saw a figure trying to free himself from his own black coat and bush twigs on the cars hood, he finally en freed himself, jumped off the hood and ripped off his ragged coat, brushed the dust away and aranged his long black hair. Then he opened the front door of the car and frigidly aksed: "Are you allright kids?" It was Jaustin, if you still haven't guessed. He explained them that he felt some evil entities presence while he was hunting for some mutated wolfmen on the other side of the town and found himself intrigued by this unholy strenght. "I can not feel him anymore, this means that either he has left or he is just hiding far away waiting for a moment to approach and attack," he explained. "That son of bi**h was haunting us for the last few days" Suzette affrontily said as if it was Jaustins fault. "Rise your voice again and i'll cut your tongue off" he calmly said with a smile on his bloodless lips, "But when speaking about such a strong spectres, they usually don't haunt anybody, they don't feel dishonour when being defeated, they just move on to the next victim... hmm, yes i knew that this one was different in some way... let me follow you guys for a while, it seems that he has some score to settle with some of You, you can be the bait... I-i meant I can help You get rid of that scum, I have something that will make his immortal soul mortal... very mortal..." he smiled gamely "soo... where are You guys heading to?"... *** Yeah well, what is the point of our trio's journey btw? *** and see you on Monday! Have a nice weekend and all that s*it! *** last post for this week 
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02-16-2007, 11:58 PM
DAMN IT!
 late again, OK, Suzette... i meant SweetSuicide, your call... totally last post for this week
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02-17-2007, 12:01 AM
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Charlie is to get me and turn me in for money . I don't know what Yamato's point is. He's just kind of there. lol. But I'm gone. Cuase I'll die without you.
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02-17-2007, 12:45 AM
Charlie's point was to turn Suzette in for money but after hearing how Suzette has issues with King Raymond she is more interested in perhaps finding an ally against King Raymond because no one will go up against him. Charlie has her own past that will come out later if necessary. King Raymond did something to her juring the war. You guys may have been 8 or 9 but charlie would have been 14 or 15 so she was fighting juring the war. There is no point to their journey that is what we are writing towards.......
I hope I'm getting your characters right if I'm not just let me know.  Thanks Aoshi  FEAR ME!!!
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02-17-2007, 12:59 AM
I slowly walk about the corner to see Suezette and others running away from what was believed by them to be nothing but something was attacking them. Looking dead in the eyes of the spector i laugh and pull out my two automatic pistols with blessed bullets. "you know its funny how you guys run away from such a pathetic demon." Jaustin says. " In the name of God, impure souls of the living dead shall be banished into eternal damnation. Amen." smirks as he looks at the beast standing before him as suezette and the others stand behind me looking on to what should be a great spectactular fight. " Restrain Control Style Version 1 Ability Restraint Cancellation....Approval Recognized." Everyone watches as what looks like a red enchantment circle of satanic origin appears on the ground around him. I then appear with my hair enlongated its black stands going down to my thighs. "Now how should i send you to the purgatory of eternal suffering?" jaustin asks the beast".....the beast replies " I call upon the God of Death , Seto who is one with my body burn this man with the flames of hell." jaustin grows multiple limbs that have heads of a dog which would devour anything. as the beast charges and shoot the beams of hell out of his jaws as if to hurt or kill jaustin. "Is that it?"... " The cunningness of a god that i saw at the sun of Hell?"...."even when you merged that with your body that's the best you can do?" the dog heads attack the demon with the power of another god and sends a shock wave everywhere cutting anything in its path in half. The weak god of death that gave him powers not cutting enough to even get close to Jaustin. The fight goes on for hours in the sky and all over the ground parts of each of them falling to the ground until they are in the basement of a church that was bombed. Standing there i look upon the pathetic demon. The demon brings out some sort of gun that fires fragments of the god's powers in him pulling the gun out of his skin. The beast charges and shoots all his shots missing me my hair beginning to glow and burn a cross above my head. The metal of the cross pouring over my gun as i fire the bullet in my broken gun killing the beast with a metal rod going in one side of his body and out the other. His dead corpse hangng on the metal rod like a crucifix. "No one can beat the true Undead." turns around and faces suezette "Splendid.........Quite Splendid!!.......The way your spirit is angered... you are that man's daughter indeed...." Kneels at suezette's feet.."Your commands.... my master.."
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02-17-2007, 01:03 AM
**........is confused since when did i become a bad guy excessum?? and since when do you get to make the call of what my character's motive's are?? Don't force anything that is not my thoughts for my character into the story that doesn't come from me. K thanks buddy.**
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02-17-2007, 01:14 AM
Tinkles was growling the whole time the fight was happening. Even Charlie knew. That guy was not human. He was fighting that thing from earlier that she couldn't see. What was the real shock of the day and there had been many was Suzette ... Master......."Ummm you some kind a princess hun?" Charlie asked.
Suzette turned her nose into the air and took to steps back from the man bowing at her feet. Suzette looked at Yamato then back at Charlie and then said to the man. "Thank you for helping us, Now Yamato, Charlie lets leave." Charlie looked back at the man who had now rose to his feet. She felt dizzy and a bit confused. "Umm yeah, thanks big guy." She stammered Charlie turned to head back toward the truck with Suzette and Yamato. She was going to pass out. "what is wrong with me am I sick?, I'm so dizzy What is that smell its so sweet." She thought as the lights went out. Charlie had passsed out. Yamato ran over and started calling her name. Suzette said "Yamato stop, she's fine she just fainted." Looking at the dark figure in front of her Suzette asked "What did you do to Charlie."............ Thanks Aoshi FEAR ME!!!
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02-17-2007, 01:24 AM
SoftSilentDeath I'm not trying to make you a bad guy. It's just Vampires are mysterious, and have a very dark romantisims to them so I guess most vampires just have to prove they're good. And your character has a whole bunch of strange powers right. Hope I did ok.
Thanks Aoshi FEAR ME!!!
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02-17-2007, 02:01 AM
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 And btw as Bedeviler was killed... erm, You know, there must be a antigonist of some sort 
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