Art help. Post your art

[VampireGirl1314]

I know i messed up on this one with the hands and some other places.>.<

[Kyousuke]

Here's these 2 i drew. im making a book of illustrations to sell on lulu.com. the line under the blonde shicks chin is too thick so im a fixin it. also, i forgot to shade her hair.

[RKitagawa]

Originally Posted by VampireGirl1314

I know i messed up on this one with the hands and some other places.>.<

hmm, the proportion is kinda off.
Check out this little guide for next time:


your character is about 1 and a half heads too short. The average person is around 7 and a half heads tall, this is sometimes exaggerated to 8 heads tall for females (to make the legs longer).

But you only have 6.
as you can see it should go from the chin to the breasts to the belly button. But you went straight from the chin to the belly button. There should be a whole extra head's length in there.

hope that guide helps for future drawings.

[RKitagawa]

yo, Kyousuke.

Nice pictures. All I have to say is to watch your balance. The second picture is really good. The first one is a little off though.


If you draw a line through ur character (through their center of gravity) you can see that her hips are pushed off to the right. Since her legs are going straight down, her balance is off.

To fix this:
push the hips back over to the center
or
move the upper body over the hips
or
open the legs more so she has a wider stance

keep it up yo
peace

[Kyousuke]

Thnx a bunch! i referenced that pose from a picture. she is leaning on a table which is why the body tilts in that direction. i also fixed the should width. it looked to wide.

[Flesh]

I was bored,so i thought i could post some of my art as well...

I know it has those lazy hands and legs,but its mainly because originally,it was a really small doodle,so there wasnt much space for details xD;

And pardon for the messy lines,i was cleaning them up,but abandoned it half-ways....i just got lazy cuz its a really time-consuming job if yer doing it with a mouse.So i only got her hair and some other random spaces cleaned up.....

[DeathnoteCrazy102]

one i posted on google and is awesome.

[VampireGirl1314]

Originally Posted by DeathnoteCrazy102

one i posted on google and is awesome.

OMG i saw that on your myspace Miles.@_@

its perfect i want it.xD

[DeathnoteCrazy102]

this one is photoshop painted

[RKitagawa]

Originally Posted by Kyousuke

Thnx a bunch! i referenced that pose from a picture. she is leaning on a table which is why the body tilts in that direction. i also fixed the should width. it looked to wide.

ahhh, that makes sense now. lol I take back what I said then. You should have probably drawn in the table though.

Originally Posted by Flesh

I was bored,so i thought i could post some of my art as well...

I know it has those lazy hands and legs,but its mainly because originally,it was a really small doodle,so there wasnt much space for details xD;

And pardon for the messy lines,i was cleaning them up,but abandoned it half-ways....i just got lazy cuz its a really time-consuming job if yer doing it with a mouse.So i only got her hair and some other random spaces cleaned up.....

hmmm, proportion-wise everything is fine except the head (head is a little big).
Other than that I think you should just work on getting cleaner lines. All the details in the dress are a little hard to read.

Originally Posted by DeathnoteCrazy102

one i posted on google and is awesome.

lol, how modest of you.
It is pretty awesome though. Only thing I'd recommend is to change up your line thickness. All your lines are pretty much the same width.

I like the yotsuba one though. Yotsubato is my fav manga.