A poem

rafif · (#1 (**permalink**))

hello every body,

I'm a new member in here and this is my first post ,hope you'll enjoy reading it.

well i WROTE THIS poem about the sea

here it is

ChaRming Wizard

So beautiful in vision

Chaining your heart with no reason

Bewitching your eyes each season

when you look at him you hear

Faint whispers yet so near

Inviting you to join with no fear

you may laugh coz it's not clear

Or you may cry and sob a tear

Because you feel like an elf

Comparing him to your self

When you hold his hand

You feel it warm like the sand

Of a mysterious witch land

When you look at his face

You run towards him in pace

As if you are in a race

When you sit by his side

You feel that you are in a horse ride

Running freely with a guide

He is a wizard with a magical stick

Who turns wool into silk

And water into sweet milk

He is a sorcerer with whom

you can ride a magical broom

And fly in the milky way

To other galaxies far away

Where you can live and stay

Forever Happy and Gay

26/6/2009

tohruchan7 · (#2 (**permalink**))

sweet i like how it rymes!! lol

rafif · (#3 (**permalink**))

aregatou gozaimasu sis

so nice of you to be in my topic

regards

Mikaruv · (#4 (**permalink**))

I really like it! It sounds wonderfully

I want another ><

burkhartdesu · (#5 (**permalink**))

You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?

tohruchan7 · (#6 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by burkhartdesu

You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?

O.O OHHHH that will be a challange. wat about a haiku???

JayT · (#7 (**permalink**))

That made me go hug Tommy. *tear* ( ,;

Lamb · (#8 (**permalink**))

"Because you feel like an elf

Comparing him to your self"

Lol I like that part.Cute poem.I like poems that rhyme.^_^

rafif · (#9 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by Mikaruv

I really like it! It sounds wonderfully

I want another ><

Ok my dear sis you'll gind an other one soon

thanks a lot for being in my topic

rafif · (#10 (**permalink**))

Quote:

Originally Posted by burkhartdesu

You sure can rhyme.

But the true test is: can you make a poem without rhyming?

Lol nice test ok I can write without rhyming and the next poem will one of them

see you in the challenge topic