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the extent of my creativity - 04-03-2007, 08:46 AM

The two of us sit stuck in pretext
A desperate conversation unable to begin
A radiating coldness holding the room
Unable to share secrets of great meaningness
Ones that will relieve my theories of doubt
But alone a stream of letters with no seen purpose
How long I have waited for someone who can help me
With the life that was planned for me
Which I am fixated on learning more about
And now the answer is sitting in front of me
Unwilling or unable to relieve me of my suffering
She holds the key to my past present and my future
Unaware of the validity of which she holds


Does anyone understand?
The tears escaping from her face
She longs for that belief she once had
That good always triumphs over evil
Even when it stops it carries on
Playing in her head like a black and white film
When the depression sets in it takes over everything slows down its like walking through treacle
You try your hardest to get through but it drags you down
Everyone’s faces are blurred and you cant see there eyes
But it still feels like everyone is staring
She curls up in a ball, a private cocoon
Trying to block everyone else out
Yet they still find there way in
through her thoughts which she holds so dear
shes crying out for attention
but can anybody hear her? Is anybody listening?
Is anybody willing to help the girl who is lost within herself?


Im all alone and im hurting
The intense pain in my heart is burning
Since the day he left me forsaken
The soul from the body was taken
A once adventurous spirit shattered beyond repair
I sit alone crying empty tears of despair
When I was with him it was the pinnacle of my existence
But to him an endless routine of persistence
My life is suddenly dejected
And I feel guilty for the way I reacted
If I knew from the start that he’d leave me
I never would of let him lead me
Into this feeling of being sombre and grey
Yet I continue to love him to this day







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04-03-2007, 08:49 AM




etch a sketch wooooooo....so fun ^^




heres a few of my poems and drawings and peices of writting
i would post stories but they take waaaaaaaaay to long to write out ...plus they arent worth the time ha haa


friends:
Each of my friends are different, individual and unique, we all travelled along different paths yet we all reached the same place. Strangers at birth yet with age came friendship. We are all bound by an invisible rope, sometimes the rope will fray and someone willl break free , yet our loss for the person who chose to travel alone is softened by those standing by our side. Over time the rope thickens. You are never truly alone they are always there with you standing by your side. Togther we are strong creating a wall which willingly takes away some of the impact when we are struck. On our journey some get left behind like insects on a lake forced to take a different path due to an unforeseen ripple on the water. However as we grow our rope branches out with new friendships which our always greeted with a smile. Alone we are vunerable to lifes twists yet together we can share each moment each feeling each step forward. I hope to travel with you always. I can happily say I have found true friends

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04-03-2007, 08:53 AM

Ah man, your really good, so much talent -wishes he had half your talent-


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04-03-2007, 08:56 AM

[Sorta quoted from Rikku777 =P]
Utterly speechless and overwhelmed by an overload of creativity X_X


There's no such thing as happy endings, for when you find true love, happiness is everlasting.
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04-03-2007, 08:57 AM

thankyou riku8 and coolnard your toooo kind XD
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04-03-2007, 09:34 AM

WOooooooooooooooooooooooo...cool..haha..pardon the long wooooo-ing..or the wowing, maybe you can hear me over in englishland..haha..this is seriously cool + great stuff..keep it up..i especially like tt eye, the one on tt magnetic board thingy..haha..=)


You once told me that words can show feeling but cannot express
But I hope you’ll be able to tell from these words what I mean
Look with your beautiful heart and not your lovely eyes
Because what’s true is not necessarily seen
You’re the one person who can make my day
And on a wing and a prayer, I’ll always hold you. Always
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04-03-2007, 09:39 AM

yeh i heard ya haa haa thankyou sweetpea
oh etch a sketch thats bloody hard to do but really fun ha haa

erm...why is this thread backwards???????
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04-03-2007, 09:41 AM

i really resent being associated with a pea..reminds me of yoda from star wars..that small wrinkled pea..haha..jkjk..=)

backwards?


You once told me that words can show feeling but cannot express
But I hope you’ll be able to tell from these words what I mean
Look with your beautiful heart and not your lovely eyes
Because what’s true is not necessarily seen
You’re the one person who can make my day
And on a wing and a prayer, I’ll always hold you. Always
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04-03-2007, 09:48 AM

okie dokie you can be...*thinks* sweetcorn ha haa get it ..oh god that was bad ha ha

oh no wait its not backward ..oh crap im loosing it ;_;
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04-03-2007, 09:52 AM

haha..nice try nice try..=D
there there..why did u think it's backwards?haha..creative people have extraordinary imaginations..so i don't think it means anything bad..=p


You once told me that words can show feeling but cannot express
But I hope you’ll be able to tell from these words what I mean
Look with your beautiful heart and not your lovely eyes
Because what’s true is not necessarily seen
You’re the one person who can make my day
And on a wing and a prayer, I’ll always hold you. Always
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