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Sydney 04-29-2007 04:55 AM

Without You
 
Two lovers can't hear the sound
Of their hearts anymore
The pouring rain dims the city lights
Until they can't see

The past and hope of tomorrow
Disappear in the rain
But they still look back

Take me, my heart, our past
And tear it all apart
There is nothing left but sadness
And we cannot carry on

Take tonight and my everything;
But please hold me one last time
Take this night and my all;
And bloom a love
Where I can't hurt you

Take me, my heart, our past
And tear it all apart
There is nothing left but sadness
And we cannot carry on

All the memories and the hope
Will dry up to nothing
If I reach out
Will I hold your hand again?

Take tomorrow
And this day
And let it fall apart
You can't hear in the pouring rain
Two lovers heartbeats stop.

Yuri 04-29-2007 05:36 AM

oh, that is a lovely poem sydney, I like it very much. do you like writing poems alot?

Yggdrazzil 05-02-2007 12:26 PM

Errrr I have a hard time grasping what it's about. Is it about two people committing suicide together? Because they don't love eachother anymore? (sorry if this offends you, I want to understand the poem, that's all :P)

Hisuwashi 05-02-2007 07:15 PM

I like it a lot! it's great...

Beki 05-03-2007 01:19 PM

wow...


:)


i loved it


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