Gotta write a song...

[musashi]

Hey all! Um...for my creative writing class, I have to choose a band or artist and write a song for that person. I chose Utada Hikaru because most of my friends say that the some of the poems i write sound like stuff she would sing about. I figured it would be easy, but it isn't. I can't think of any good topics or anything....any ideas or suggestions?

[Ichirin]

Machine © - Teknoid X Machine Generation (me )


What if i wanted to break ?
Laugh at it and into your face.
What would you do ?

What if i felt to the floor ?
Couldn't take this anymore.
Now what would you do ?

chorus:
Now, i can't feel...
What you want to say...
Killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)

What if i'd say i was sorry,
for all misery in the world.
What would you do ?

What when nations go to war,
me in the middle.
What would you do ?

You are a lie, just a beautiful lie.
You don't care for me.

chorus:
Now, i can't feel...
What you want to say...
Killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)

You're making me a machine... feelingless... painless.

chorus:
You're killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)
What i really am !! (scream)



Not really what she would sing, but it's something i would sing . You may find a start in it, or not. Probably not, i suck

[SweetSuicide]

o wow.... ich.. that's really good!!
Mu, good luck! lol

[musashi]

Thanks hun......Ichi, can you like, copy-write that so i can't technically steal it? lol love ya much babe!

[Ichirin]

copyrighted it (lolz)

changed name aswell from 11leven to Teknoid X Machine Generation.
now i just need to be able to form a band or play a guitar, drums, bass all at the same time.

[musashi]

lol...well, sorry i can't stay on long baby-doll (i'm in a "pet-name" mood today...sorry) I'm under my bros name and it's his turn to get the comp for a change since i'm always on...lol

[Kaedaru]

Originally Posted by Ichirin

Machine © - Teknoid X Machine Generation (me )


What if i wanted to break ?
Laugh at it and into your face.
What would you do ?

What if i felt to the floor ?
Couldn't take this anymore.
Now what would you do ?

chorus:
Now, i can't feel...
What you want to say...
Killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)

What if i'd say i was sorry,
for all misery in the world.
What would you do ?

What when nations go to war,
me in the middle.
What would you do ?

You are a lie, just a beautiful lie.
You don't care for me.

chorus:
Now, i can't feel...
What you want to say...
Killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)

You're making me a machine... feelingless... painless.

chorus:
You're killing me, thrilling me.
Now, i am a machine.
This is what i really am !! (scream)
What i really am !! (scream)



Not really what she would sing, but it's something i would sing . You may find a start in it, or not. Probably not, i suck

Um you might want to be careful on the first two vereses
They are just really really simliar to 30 Seconds to Mars :"The Kill"
I dont want you getting in trouble when your song becomes famous!

-kaedaru-

[Ichirin]

Originally Posted by Kaedaru

Um you might want to be careful on the first two vereses
They are just the same as 30 seconds to mars "The Kill"
I dont want you getting in trouble when your song becomes famous!

-kaedaru-

First vers is taken from 30 secs to mars, yes. But second has been edited and then i've been thinking, but there are still some roots of their songs in it. It's what i always do, to start with.

[Ichirin]

Army Hymn - Teknoid X Machine Generation (me )

Hey (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
You're gonna die ! (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
You're gonna die ! (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)

-small instrumental solo-

Hey (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
What do you want ? (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
What do you want ? (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)

-small instrumental solo-

Counting the deads,
looking at the blood,
Saving our believes from dam-na-tion.
Couting the deads,
watching our souls,
Saving our soldiers from dam-na-tion,
dam-na-tion.

And blood will fill the gutter !

Hey,
follow me to the army.
Make your dreams come tru,
make your mother proud of you.

-small instrumental solo-

Hey (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
You (singer)
Go (crowd/band)
You (singer)
Go (crowd/band)
Hey (singer)
Go (crowd/band)

-large instrumental solo-

Hey (singer)
Hey (crowd/band)
You (singer)
Go (crowd/band)
You (singer)
Go (crowd/band)
Go (singer)
Join (crowd/band)

The arm-e-e-y !