For anyone who likes Hip-Hop

Sphinx01 · (#1 (**permalink**))

Yo if any one out there listens to rap, please check my song and tell me if you like it or not...honest opinions appreciated. "One LUV"

MySpace.com - Sphinx Da God - COLUMBIA, South Carolina - Hip Hop / Rap / Alternative - www.myspace.com/youngsphinx

Sphinx01 · (#2 (**permalink**))

I hope u guys enjoy it

Kyousuke · (#3 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by Sphinx01

Yo if any one out there listens to rap, please check my song and tell me if you like it or not...honest opinions appreciated. "One LUV"

MySpace.com - Sphinx Da God - COLUMBIA, South Carolina - Hip Hop / Rap / Alternative - www.myspace.com/youngsphinx

i like it. the stoytelling is good, it has emotion in it. it has a feeling to it, something i havent heard since i left phoenix. you have anymore?

Sphinx01 · (#4 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by Kyousuke

i like it. the stoytelling is good, it has emotion in it. it has a feeling to it, something i havent heard since i left phoenix. you have anymore?

Not yet recorded but I will soon enough...I'll be int he studio all day tomorrow

Sphinx01 · (#5 (**permalink**))

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Originally Posted by YukiHohoemi23

did you really make this song? It sounds great I love it I could listen to it everyday ^_^ well except for the part where the two guys keep laughing and talking but the beat is sooo nice

Well I'm glad u like it...the instrumental actually Came from Samurai Champloo...and the two guys...that was all me, just changing my voice

Sphinx01 · (#6 (**permalink**))

yes I luv to rap over all kinds of beats..and I love challenging myself to write thought provoking lyrics

Sphinx01 · (#7 (**permalink**))

I will and thanks ...Sounds like ur a new fan huh?

hypekstatic · (#8 (**permalink**))

I noticed you used Aruarian Dance from Nujabes lol
I love NUJABES!

I'm a big follower of hip hop so I may come off blunt.
The lyrics were good, I can tell you put thought into it,
but it doesn't feel genuine to me, what you rap about,
it sounds generic in a sense that anyone can rhyme....
don't take it too personally, I know youre starting out,
but overall it was okay. I like your voice for one, your flow
is pretty good but just the lyrics didn't really affect me or
anything which is something I expect for using Aruarian Dance!
That beat has so much depth in the loop itself.
As I said, overall it was okay and I do think your flow is smooth.

Just a little advice though, I know it as just a demo, but
when you use random noises like talking or laughing, you
might want to transition it a bit smoother. It was hard to
listen to the middle of the song when you guys start talking
randomly. I see what you're trying to do though, alot of rap
songs have a conversational transition, but you really have to
make it work.

Anyway sorry again if I come off a bit strong, but I am
a hip hop JUNKY, and I won't let it go too easily xP
You are an aspiring artist though, keep doing what you do
and you'll improve.

Sphinx01 · (#9 (**permalink**))

Hey thanks and I'll keep this in mind...and no hard feelings, In fact I'm glad u caught the instrumental, so thank u for words

Sinner · (#10 (**permalink**))

It sounds really great!