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MaymeRachael 09-28-2007 07:16 PM

"Dark Poems"
 
All I can do
Is sit and stare
Out my window
Seeing dreams broken
Like a plate
Being dropped
On the Floor
Swept away
Like leaves
In the wind
Scattering everywhere
In the pile
Of despair
----------------
Forever swirling
Like a pool
In the ocean
Taking lives
Like an illness
Unseen
For an amount
Of time
Confusing people
Like mysteries
Giving clues
Clues to uncover
The story of life
As we know it.
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As my days go by...
Hopes of a better life surface.
Promises are broken...
Wishing on fall stars,
Just doesn't work anymore...
Nothing cures the pain,
Of being alone.
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:happypika:

onexsoul 09-28-2007 07:41 PM

Tell him i'm sorry,
Tell him I care,
Tell him this last thing,
it's because of him
that i'm not there
Cold tears of sorrow
agony, disgust and lust
Cold tears of pain
Cheers to us
The Broken

~amber D.~

onexsoul 09-28-2007 07:47 PM

i wrote this just now

my friend hates me
i tried to put my mixed and confused feelings into it...


I always wanted to say
that ur the one i loved
but i never got to say it
i always wanted to tell you
that i hated you
but you always looked at me with despair
with that one look my heart was broken
im sry i never told you
how i felt
what i wanted
how you broke me in two
with every word
u killed me
u wished me dead
and i was
i never wanted to hurt you tho
i wanted u to understand
i loved you
but i also hated you
i never wanted you to no
how i felt
it scared me to no that you would be killd
when i told you the truth
im sry
ive caused you pain
ive caused you heartach
ill never forgive myself for it
im sry...
ill c u again
maybe
ill be looking up
while youll be looking down upon me
ill scream at you to release me
youll laugh but look at me with those heartbreaking eyes
and ill just say
im sry
ull turn your head and walk away
asking me “How many times have you said that, but uve leid.”
Ill then cry out “Im sry!!!”
but ull back will turned and u wont hear me
so in this ill tell you
im sry
again
and
again
im sry
im sry
please forgive me
my dear
my love
my darling
my bestfriend
im sry

MaymeRachael 09-28-2007 07:57 PM

dang girl ^_^ Really good tho ^_~ Keep it up!

SweetSuicide 09-28-2007 07:58 PM

(I saw a thread that said dark poems and i wrote this as I went so please dont get bad if it's bad lol)

I look up to the sky
And I start wondering why
Anything I do
Just won't let me die
I'm tried of pain
The greif is too strong
My knees are weak
And at night I fall
The scars keep multipying
Not knowing how they get there
At night I am different
From when I wake at the dawn
I need to escape
I need to be released
From this pain and misrey
I'm so unhappy.

Excessum 09-28-2007 08:12 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SweetSuicide (Post 250768)
(I saw a thread that said dark poems and i wrote this as I went so please dont get bad if it's bad lol)

I look up to the sky
And I start wondering why
Anything I do
Just won't let me die
I'm tried of pain
The greif is too strong
My knees are weak
And at night I fall
The scars keep multipying
Not knowing how they get there
At night I am different
From when I wake at the dawn
I need to escape
I need to be released
From this pain and misrey
I'm so unhappy.


Wicked sick... it's really awesome!!!

Hmm... i guess i should write some as well... ok, so what does bother me right now the most? Oh yeah... :rolleyes:
here goes nothing...

Hitting the table over and over again
Kicking myself and screaming
Pain inside is taking over my brain
i'm falling in-to delusions, i am dreaming
of fast food sin and cholesterol
of anything i could swallow
because i'm hungry!
I will not survive till tomorrow!
-cut-

sorry... wanted to make it longer... but i can not think straight while i'm hungry...

terra104 09-28-2007 08:17 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by SweetSuicide (Post 250768)
(I saw a thread that said dark poems and i wrote this as I went so please dont get bad if it's bad lol)

I look up to the sky
And I start wondering why
Anything I do
Just won't let me die
I'm tried of pain
The greif is too strong
My knees are weak
And at night I fall
The scars keep multipying
Not knowing how they get there
At night I am different
From when I wake at the dawn
I need to escape
I need to be released
From this pain and misrey
I'm so unhappy.

loved it!!!

Acidreptile 09-28-2007 08:38 PM

I Hate You

There’s no mercy for the stupid
There’s no hope for the wicked
I hate the glass,I hate the stones
I hate everything else
But not more than I hate you

I cut you at pieces,throw you at the blender
I kill you just like you killed me
Is not enough to stab the knife
I’ll reap your existence with the scythe

Suffered for eternity,suffered the weak
Crossed the flesh,annihilated the child
Fueled the hate,and I incinerate

I hate the world,I hate the people
I hate the pain,I hate the masterplan
I hate everything else
But not more than I hate you

I killed you,just like you killed me
Can’t stand you breathing
I steal your life
I cut you at pieces
I’m free of your pathetic presence
I hate you more than everything else


PS: I always use "At" instead of "In".

onexsoul 09-28-2007 09:22 PM

WOW U GUYS ARE REALLY GOOD...

*sigh* my poems arent good and i cant make them up well
my friend wote one

here it is


He came into her room that night
wreaking of spririts and wine
He gently shook her awake
she looked up, smiled softly
then she saw it
the spirits dancing in the firey pits of his eyes
He stared at her, greedy demons taking her in
She stared back fearfully, fighting back the building tears
"Not again" she sobbed "Not tonight, please"
She begged, pleaded, and fell silent, crying to herself
He tugged up her night gown and pulled it off
Tossing her around like a rag doll
One hand holding her down, the other tugging at his own waistband
He smiled at her, an evil foreboding smile
A great sob wracked her small fragile frame

He came into her bed that night
With intentions none to pure
He later left her bed that night
Leaving her broken, crimson and tears flowing freely


its interesting
and creepy
i liked how she wrote it tho.... she 17 btw...

onexsoul 09-28-2007 09:24 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MaymeRachael (Post 250766)
dang girl ^_^ Really good tho ^_~ Keep it up!

haha thanks i made it up as i went
thats y its so dang confusign
i first was talking about this guy but then i switched to my friend who hate me now... so yea!!! ^.^


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