My Manga : Red Oni

[Kyousuke]

The story is called "Red Oni" The story starts in the past with two men the hero yoshimitsu and the Rival Shinzo. Both men were born of gods and have great powers. both men also happened to fall in love with the same woman Shinobu. Yoshimitsu was going to wed her when he finds out that she is also a lover of shinzo. When he finds this out he gets into a battle to seek revenge for what shinzo has done but during this shinzo accidentally kills Shinobu. When this happens Yoshimitsu goes on a vendetta to kill shinzo when both men enter a cave and kill eachother their. after their death a mysterious prophecy written into the stone is created which not even the gods know came from. The prophecy says nothing but shows pictures of a single man and in each hand he holds spheres. behind him unknown objects.

2000 years later. a man who seeks to take over the world finds a way to resurrect Shinzo into the present day by opening a gateway to hell . When he does bring him back instead of follow the mans orders shinzo kills him and runs off not knowing what is happening or where he is. When shinzo kills this man the portal that brang him back stays open and the only person who could close it was killed. the portal doesnt just stay in one location , it switches to different dimensions and universes bringing about different creatures from it. After finding out what happens the Gods send a guardian down to find Yoshimitsu reincarnation. the guardian is also sent to find other people to defend and guard against this threat until a way to close the portal can be found. when he finds yoshimitsu now known as Yoshi he trains him and finds yoshi's close friend Riku is a descendant of another earth-bound god. while yoshi is training he is told that he has the power to create life and even new worlds if he wanted. he is also told that he is also not bound by fate. he does not have a path chosen for him which means he can die at any point. after leaving his training for the day he tries to use his powers but winds up creating a girl. meanwhile an elderly couple find Shinzo passed out in their field and tend to his wounds . their he meets a young girl who takes care of him. she says she is only visiting her grandparents and will only be their for a short time. During this time both of them fall in love with each other. after a brief period she returns to the city where she lives. Shinzo does not yet that the girl he has fallen in love with is Riku's girlfriend. i will not release the rest of the story or what the prochecy means.


I put my main character designs up.

[Kyousuke]

The rough draft