My Anime!

[manganimefan227]

Ok when I grow up I want to write a manga/anime.I have already come up with the story and charactors.So here is the main story.

One winter night,eight children wished upon a star afterwards a strange light hit each one of them.Six years later when they were all 12.Each of them,in a uniqe way,meet a "alien" that calls themselves a Kaichiro.Kaichiro according to these kids,are lifeforms created when a child makes a wish upon a star.And the Kaichiro is created based on the wish.So those Kaichiro can help make that dream come true . . .One day 6 years before,a boy made a wish that all children would suffer the same way he did.So now there is a super strong Kaichiro with powers going around and doing just that.Can the Kaichiro stop this madness?And how did this kid suffer?Find out . . .In about mmmmmm 15 years or so.So how is it?

[Powermad147]

Sounds interesting ^_^ I'd gladly wait 15 years xD.

[silversoraryuu]

kool, u wanna write manga/anime too just like me. im a aspiring mangaka =)
my story is kindda long and long and long and hard to explain b/c there r alot of definitions.

[forgotenmemory]

Cool! I want to read it if you ever make it!

[Sblegach]

You should post some of your drawings or sketches you may have for the characters, for your soon to be fans to see.

[silversoraryuu]

wait i can go copy and paste sum... this was just the ruff draft. i took it and edited it on paper. the scene atcually happens differently but this is what basically happen, but they say different stuff.

this is not from the begining
what's going on: basically Sai is being controled a Depression/Soul Slipper. they enter ppl's soul and control them. a Casitakho is a alternate univerese where they r sealed. well, this is a lil bit of my story.




At the game it reached half time. Izzarra and Sai got up to go watch for Tiani.
Izzarra: Hey look, it's Prophecy and Riku. What's Riku doing with him?
When they caught up they tried to act casual.
Izzarra: Hey guys.
Prophecy: Hey.
Riku: Yeah.
Izzarra shook Riku's hand as he started piercingly at Sai.
Sai: Hi.
Riku nodded his head in response. He then shook his hand. While they were shaking hands They both suddenly stopped and looked at each other. A long pause came over them when Riku suddenly activated a seal in his hand. Sai's eyes turned pitch black in response then he leapt back. Riku dashed for him, but a voice called him back.
Zauke: Wait!
Riku: What, Zauke?
Izzarra: Where'd you come from?
Zauke: Don't go after him.
Riku: Why not.
Zauke: Your taking this too lightly.
Prophecy: How do you know what's going on?
Zauke: I heard when Reno whistled. Reno only call Riku by whistling when he thinks it's serious.
Prophecy: How would he know anything about the situation.
Zauke: He can read peoples voice all too well.
Izzarra: hold the phone! What's going on? Why did Sai's eyes just flash black and then he ran away.
Zauke: that wasn't Sai, that was a Soul Slipper inside of him.
Izzarra: A Depression.
Zauke: Right, now you know how serious this is. We can't kill it with out killing Sai too unless we force it out of his body.
Izzarra: How do we do that?
Prophecy: Whoa, we do not you.
Izzarra: I wanna help!
Prophecy: No, your too young.
Izzarra: Sin was doing stuff like this when he was only seven.
Prophecy: your not Sin.
Izzarra: Sometimes I with I was. Maybe then people will stop looking down on me.
He turned away and quickly left.
Prophecy: Izzarra!
Riku: Prophecy.
When Riku called his name it stopped him from going after Izzarra. Riku shook his head.
Riku: You need to handle your other brother right now.
Prophecy: All right.
Zauke: I'll work on tracking him. Meet me in Decenon at night fall.
Zauke turned into a wolf and dashed away. Meanwhile. Later that night Prophecy sat the roof of his home waiting for the signal from Zauke. He sat in silence until he heard a voice call his name from behind him. When he turned and looked it was Izzarra. He looked sad or as something was wrong with him. When Prophecy looked him he turned away.
Izzarra: Prophecy?
Prophecy: Izzarra.
Izzarra: Don't let anything bad happen to Sai, all right.
Prophecy: I won't let anything happen to him, I promise.
He heard a whistle in the distance.
Izzarra: I guess that means you have to go.
Prophecy stood and walked to the edge of the roof.
Prophecy: Hold me to it.
Izzarra: What?
Prophecy: Hold me to it. I won't let anything happen to Sai, I promise.
Izzarra nodded his head. In a Slip stream Prophecy vanished. He landed with Zauke and Riku.
Prophecy: So?
At that second Xiesuke landed by him.
Prophecy: Whoa, what is he doing here.
Zauke: Xiesuke specializes in the art of trapping and cornering.
Prophecy: So, he could care less about Sai.
Xiesuke: Did you ever just notice that it's not just Sai in danger but the whole village? If the Depression gets on the inside Zyira is finished.
Prophecy first looked at him angrily but then noticed his words were true.
Prophecy: So what are we doing?
Zauke: Xiesuke already placed a Casitakho around this area, so if we could lure him here all you have to do is close the seal.
Prophecy: Wait, won't that take Sai with it.
Everyone grew silent.
Zauke: Prophecy...
Prophecy: No, nothings gonna happen to Sai right.
Riku: If we find him we'll need to either kill him or force the Depression out of him.
Prophecy: What?
Zauke: If you find him, you need to kill him. No holding back. Trust me.
Prophecy: No, Sai's gonna be okay right.
Zauke: I can't promise that.
Prophecy: Well I did!
Prophecy turned and leapt away.
Prophecy: * I promise you'll be all right Sai. I promise.
Riku, Zauke, and Xiesuke didn't move a step.
Riku: Now what?
Zauke: I'll keep an eye on him you two keep an eye on the Casitakho lock. If he steps in, close it.
In the distance Prophecy searched for Sai. Above him he heard a voice that sounded like Sai's but masked. When he looked up it was Sai but the Depression was controlling his soul.
Sai: Hehehe, they were wrong sending the brats brother.
Prophecy: What do you want with Sai!?
Sai: Nothing in particularly, I just needed to get into Zyira unnoticed.
Prophecy: Your kind was sealed away long ago.
Sai: Yes, but with bargaining we were released.
Prophecy: Who let you go!?
Sai: Oh, that I can't tell, not because I don't want to but I think it would break your little heart.
Prophecy: Why you!
Prophecy leapt for him and charged punched at him but he leapt dodged and ran away.
Prophecy: Get back here!
Sai: I don't have time to fool with you.
As they were running they past clear by Riku.
Riku: What?
Prophecy stopped as he came near Riku.
Prophecy: Don't close the portal.
Riku: Prophecy...
Prophecy: Give me a chance to get it out of him.
Riku: I...
Prophecy: Please.
Riku: All right, you got three minutes.
Prophecy: Thank you.
He dashed off after Sai. Sai looked back to Prophecy and when he looked forward Xiesuke was in front of him with a charge attack. But he dodged in the nick of time.
Xiesuke: Damn it, I missed.
Prophecy: Be careful, if you hit him you'll hit Sai too.
Xiesuke: Stand back.
Xiesuke ran to Sai and charged punched toward him but he fluently dodged all his attacks.
Sai: Wow, your good.
Xiesuke: Shove it!
Xiesuke punched him square in the face gut when he did him and Sai switched places.
Prophecy: What?
Xiesuke: Substitute?
Sai: No, a mirror technique. You were never going after me in the first place, you just thought you were.
Xiesuke: Why don't you just shut up!
Xiesuke ran to Sai, the earth picked up under his feet and he Slip streamed to him.
Prophecy: Xiesuke!
Prophecy kicked up a log and threw it towards Xiesuke. As it flew to him he caught it on fire.
Xiesuke: Prophecy! What were you thinking! He wasn't going to move.
Sai: He's right, but that's because my little brother wouldn't let anything happen to me will he?
Xiesuke: Your starting to really bug me.
Prophecy: Xiesuke stop!
Prophecy shot water at the log that was on fire and smoke filled the air over him.
Sai: Look, my brothers a elemental.
Prophecy: Shut up, your not my brother.
Sai: Aww, don't hurt my feelings.
Prophecy: Let Sai go and let's fight man to man.
Sai: I would but you see, I've grown quite attached to this body of mine. Besides the moment I left his body your friend over there would close me in a Casitakho seal, and I'm not planing on going back any time soon.
Prophecy: Fine, I didn't want to have to do this.

[Sblegach]

Pretty original names, and story good so far! Keep it up!

[silversoraryuu]

Originally Posted by Sblegach

Pretty original names, and story good so far! Keep it up!

thanks this is the first time i let any1 actually read apart of my story. i drew the characters but i don't hav a scanner.

[Sblegach]

ok here's the easiest thing i found you can do, get a phone prepaid or plan, with a camera and take a picture then send it to your e-mail and upload it to whatever i dont know how to put pictures up here im new, and yeah thats about it.

[silversoraryuu]

lol, thats what i did when i put the pics on myspace but it came out real small and i don't hav the phone anymore.

hey wanna b apart of 1 of my clans. there in my signature