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02-24-2011, 07:52 PM

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-Sorry guys, random feelings.- I KNOW IT SUCKS. I just miss her...
Since this elicits a responses such as "been there" and "I so understand", I would say it you are being to hard on yourself. It communicates very well.


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Since this elicits a responses such as "been there" and "I so understand", I would say it you are being to hard on yourself. It communicates very well.
Thanks But i've tried to talk to her, she doesn't reply.


I only feel what I want to feel.
If you can make me fall in love, GOOD for you.
I want to be who I am, oh yeah, I'm Ryo
So yeah, believe or don't.
I'm ruthless and unkind, but show me compassion, and maybe we'll be friends.
Love is a myth, and no one can change that.
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02-25-2011, 07:58 PM

I wrote quite a few myself. All were inspired by very strong feelings, and majority by love. I have put them all together and published them last year. The book has few of my calligraphy works inside. If anyone is interested you can look at the bottom of my blog, there is a link to the book (can have a peek inside). There might be few spelling mistakes on the blog, I did not have time to edit the blog after I published the book. I was too busy writing another one ^_^. I guess I need to sit down and review it some day.

On the blog there are three main cathegories there, easy to navigate via menu on the top of the site. Here is the link:

Tears of dragon - poetry blog


and I am pasting few of them:


Loath to soar
In silent air
Wooed by a draft
Of liquid awe
Praising the sun
In tune with night
A lonely floss
Of secret love





Wobbled her dish spilling life
All over mine
She hushed me through a smile
Should I decline?
I feel a storm like crawling sin
All over my skin
I touched her time with mine
Feeling’s divine





Scent of your skin
Bliss of your eyes
Sweet venom of lips
Hair brushing skies
Will of a sacred beast
Words pealed of lies
Mind shifted to East
I have seven lives






Sound of silk
Rubbing the air
Touch of sun
In late afternoon
Color of stars
Million in one
Light as a feather
While falling down
I am hugged by words
When you speak to me





Whenever you think of me
I embrace it like a kid
Whenever you smile to me
I am embraced by one






A place to where time flies
To rest on pillow of dreams
A mind with which time plays
Collusion of innocent twins
A fortune of lost in adult life
Sound remedy for reality of lies
A flange of shy child memories
Charmed by smiling skies









An open door left
For a curious kid
A realm beyond
A blind mind
A color of smile
Upon a day time
Shy wish of life
A peak I climb
Tale of the Wild
Shadow of orchid
Sun’s goodbye
A magic orbit
Fire within
That never dies
Enchanted mirrors
Your beautiful eyes






Copyright © 2006 - 2011 by Piotr Ponte-Sypniewski

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02-28-2011, 07:08 PM

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I wrote quite a few myself. All were inspired by very strong feelings, and majority by love. I have put them all together and published them last year. The book has few of my calligraphy works inside. If anyone is interested you can look at the bottom of my blog, there is a link to the book (can have a peek inside). There might be few spelling mistakes on the blog, I did not have time to edit the blog after I published the book. I was too busy writing another one ^_^. I guess I need to sit down and review it some day.

On the blog there are three main cathegories there, easy to navigate via menu on the top of the site. Here is the link:

Tears of dragon - poetry blog


and I am pasting few of them:


Loath to soar
In silent air
Wooed by a draft
Of liquid awe
Praising the sun
In tune with night
A lonely floss
Of secret love





Wobbled her dish spilling life
All over mine
She hushed me through a smile
Should I decline?
I feel a storm like crawling sin
All over my skin
I touched her time with mine
Feeling’s divine





Scent of your skin
Bliss of your eyes
Sweet venom of lips
Hair brushing skies
Will of a sacred beast
Words pealed of lies
Mind shifted to East
I have seven lives






Sound of silk
Rubbing the air
Touch of sun
In late afternoon
Color of stars
Million in one
Light as a feather
While falling down
I am hugged by words
When you speak to me





Whenever you think of me
I embrace it like a kid
Whenever you smile to me
I am embraced by one






A place to where time flies
To rest on pillow of dreams
A mind with which time plays
Collusion of innocent twins
A fortune of lost in adult life
Sound remedy for reality of lies
A flange of shy child memories
Charmed by smiling skies









An open door left
For a curious kid
A realm beyond
A blind mind
A color of smile
Upon a day time
Shy wish of life
A peak I climb
Tale of the Wild
Shadow of orchid
Sun’s goodbye
A magic orbit
Fire within
That never dies
Enchanted mirrors
Your beautiful eyes






Copyright © 2006 - 2011 by Piotr Ponte-Sypniewski


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I only feel what I want to feel.
If you can make me fall in love, GOOD for you.
I want to be who I am, oh yeah, I'm Ryo
So yeah, believe or don't.
I'm ruthless and unkind, but show me compassion, and maybe we'll be friends.
Love is a myth, and no one can change that.
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02-28-2011, 07:13 PM

Thanks Ryo, I am glad you like them.
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02-28-2011, 07:13 PM

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Soft and subtle, quiet as she goes.

Lost in her eyes, the color? Goes unknown.

It's obvious, this feeling, untamed within.

Love, I love you, so strong, who's gonna win?

Yet the fire is silenced, cooled by your departure.

So alone, just, alone.

Sitting in a comfort I feel is gone.

Come back to me.

Please, no longer stay a fantasy.

If I did wrong, it wasn't my fault.

I didn't know, please, please, please let me know.

Alone, alone, alone.....

-Sorry guys, random feelings.- I KNOW IT SUCKS. I just miss her...
I'm Sorry Rye. I Still Love You Though.... Stay Strong Love.



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02-28-2011, 07:19 PM

You're icecream meltin' mellow
I scream that I'm tickling yellow
how do you feel?
you can deal?
is that real?

buh!!! now I feel like an idiot,,,,i quit


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02-28-2011, 08:07 PM

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You're icecream meltin' mellow
I scream that I'm tickling yellow
how do you feel?
you can deal?
is that real?

buh!!! now I feel like an idiot,,,,i quit

Cute. It reminds me of one I wrote once about building stage sets with a boyfriend. I will have to dig it out and post it.


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02-28-2011, 08:20 PM

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Cute. It reminds me of one I wrote once about building stage sets with a boyfriend. I will have to dig it out and post it.
Go for it. I wanna see that poem you wrote


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02-28-2011, 08:23 PM

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Cute. It reminds me of one I wrote once about building stage sets with a boyfriend. I will have to dig it out and post it.
You should


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