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Lightbulb Does this sound like a Manga you would be interested in? - 07-31-2007, 06:12 AM


Okay, so I have a story in mind that I am hoping to get together with writing it and start production on it. But, I'm wondering if it is something that will be interesting to the general otaku crowd.
I know the concept of Angels and Demons good and evil has always been around, but in my story you will be allowed to decide for yourself which side you think is "right" or "wrong"

Now for the general plot overview.

Two demon brothers are sent to the human world to battle against eachother for a seemingly "human" girl to be their bride. She's a sarcastic and down to earth girl who's soul holds powerful secrets from long ago that will begin a battle between the demonic and angelic realms.

The short plot summary above leaves you with many questions like:
1)Who sent them to the human world?
2)Why does it say seemingly "human"?
3) Why are they fighting for her hand in marriage?
4)What are these secrets her soul holds?

Even though the plot may sound serious it's acutally going to be an action adventure comedy, with some dramatic loving heartfelt moments.

*The two demon brothers*

Devlyn is- devious,lustful,crude, dramatic,overzealous,comical, charmingly blunt
Daemon is- a bit more reserved, cool, calm, courteous, but also lustful,and charming.
They have demonic powers and will stop at nothing to win over their bride.
They also have secret pasts that will be revealed as the story progresses.

The girl!
Zandra can be a bit shy, but she will speak her mind when it comes time. Especially when two goofy yet exceedingly charming demon guys suddenly show up at her home one morning and awaken her by loudly dueling on her roof!

The whole plot revolves around underplots that will be revealed as the story progresses. Such as loves once lost and trying to retrieve them, how things were made, many transformations whether it be physical characteristics or the thoughts and values of a character changing over time.

You will be able to explore the chaotic party inferno that is the demon realm, the relaxed,serene paradise which is the angelic realm, and the inbetween human realm we live in.


A reason I'm asking about this is also to make sure there isn't another manga or comic series very similar to this one. And who better to know this than avid manga fans on a forum?

Getting feedback on this subject will be a great help and inspiration to me especially if you find this pitch unique or like it and want to hear more about it and even want to see the production of it into a full series.

I'm thinking on calling the Demon world Makai and the Angelic one Eden. But if you think these two are overused and have better suggestions let me know.

So if you took out time to read all this and think it's a cool idea then please respond with some hopefully positive feedback.

Thanks for reading!


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