[mythix]

everyone's writing is so good, i am jealous!
vampire and aether, i really liked yours...the themes were intriguing!
hmm, well i guess i'll give this a shot... this poem's one of my first that i wrote for one of my english classes over the summer two years ago that we had to channel...well, i guess you could call it "shakespeare-esque" love into, only mixing it with edgar allen poe-like horror, if that makes sense...xD

i call it "not quite jack and sally" :
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Gasping, Struggling -
can't get enough air...
Despite your state of fascism, all I can do is stare.
Screaming, Fighting -
heartbeat declining...
Your hands around my wrists, in no way inviting.
Declaring, Fading -
it's my thoughts you are raping...
To me, you are no peace in the making.
the lights are dimmed, the music plays softly
It's all you can do to hold yourself back
my mind begs silently for a retreat
But my body begs violently for a release...
your face, full of gore -
My eyes, echo war -
Sworn enemies, we should be,
But jaded lovers, we do seem.