People, Glass Houses, Rocks.

this is only my suggestion why don't you create your own manga i mean original story original character and such that's what i do right now or create your on manga then put some special character that you wanna put in like final fantasy character

It might also be helpful to write out your storie first then come up with the actul drawing part of it. Just because someone can draw dosen't mean they can wright and if your having problems with the storie line it might be a good idea to find a partner to work on the storie with. Having a number of people read the storie and give feedback might help to.

I agree with MoonRose, and as an avid manga fan, there's nothing like a boring plot line to douse good artwork--work on the storyline before anything else,

*and if you want people to talk about it* there's a art & creativity thread dedicated for those seeking help with their pieces. This forum is more for the discussion of already established manga.