here is a bunch of poems i wrote
 

tell me if they are any good or not,please:D

Lonely


Lonely I sit here waiting, knowing that I’m safe
But as I sit here I long for something more, I’m so lonely sitting here
I just want to be free, I want to laugh and smile
I want to be together forever
Just you and I
I want to stop being lonely, to be happy
I want to be together with you forever
Smiling and laughing together
My overflowing feelings are tearing me apart
On the inside I want to scream
I seem fine but it’s all an act
I’m so lonely here in the dark …waiting
I’m so lonely here waiting for the sun to shine again
Please … save me

Night wish




Night falls and the creatures of the night awaken
In the dark you walk, unaware of your newly awaiting fate
Girls and boys are their favorite treats
Hungrily they wait, hiding in the shadows
Their faces hidden in the darkness, stalking their unsuspecting prey
Who knows you may be next, you never know till it’s too late
Into the darkness you walk, unaware that you’re being hunted
Silently they go unnoticed
Hissssss….your dead





Misery beast

There is a beast
Hiding deep within your minds cemetery
In the shadows of your heart he feasts
He is the beast of misery
Dreams long since deceased
To you and me he is a mystery
Your pain released
Your misery is harvested for his butchery
Feeding off your despair






Demons

Demons
Sly and cunning
Pain causers and killers
Instilling fear in the heart
Daimon















Death


Death
Cold as ice,
Pale as snow, blood no longer flowing
Alive but not, undead
Vampire
Undead, alive but not
Blood no longer flowing, pale as snow
Cold as ice
Death








Starry night

Under the starry night I lay listen to the night sounds
I hear the monster creeping and the crickets chirping
Owls hooting and rats scurrying

Under the starry night sky I sit
Waiting for the sun to shine one last time
I don’t want die here

As I lay under the cherry blossoms I pray that I go unnoticed
For fear I might become a demons feast

Under the starry night sky I sit
Waiting for the sun to shine one last time
I don’t want die here
In the distance I hear howling
I hear loud desperate screams
Then I realize that I too am screaming

I scream …..
Some one save me please………….

Then I see him standing in the shadows
His eyes gleaming and hair shimmering in the moonlight

Under the starry night sky I sit
Waiting for the sun to shine one last time
I don’t want die here………..












Vampire kisses

Vampire kisses and werewolf tears
Long ago in a far away place vampires and werewolves were at war
Fighting a never ending battle to overpower the other
Neither group could agree on any thing

Vampires thought the werewolves were nothing but savage beasts
Werewolves didn’t like the way the vampire treated them
The war would have lasted for all eternity if not for one brave vampire boy
His name you ask? His name is Wild

A complete opposite of his personality
Wild is very calm and quite intelligent too
Wild is the youngest of his race
A mere twenty years old
Wild is tired of all the fighting

One dark and foggy night –the night of the new moon no werewolves tonight
He sneaks out of his castle
He’s going to end this war even if it costs him his undead life

He walks through poison fang forest
Were he meets the most beautiful non-vampire he has ever seen
It was like love at first sight

Wild walks up to her
And she turns ready to attack
Wild looks into her golden eyes and she looks into Wild’s silver
She introduces herself
She is Sora

Wild asks if she’s a werewolf
Are you a vampire Sora asks in return
Yes Wild answers
Their you go that’s my answer

To be continued……………….


Foxfire


Playing in Blood Fang forest he’ll steal your heart
Then he’ll tear it out
Sometimes he is a man walking about
He’ll tear you apart

A flaming fox
A tall red haired man
Your death is his plan
He’ll send you your heart in a box

His fire shimmering in the moonlight
You’re in despair
When you saw him it set your heart a flare
You await the daylight

You wait in fear
Your end is near

They are very cool specially the last Foxfire one.:vsign:

heh heh thanks:D

good job!
i like the stary night one!

thank you:D