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Nki 04-11-2008 01:11 AM

I love Art... I love Poetry... I love love love...

Heres my RANDOM LYRIC:
title: "finite automata"
Ush, ush... are you listening the wisper? like if aNything finite automata turn the light.
Devolve upon the scissors his sucesor flying fish get-up-and-daemon
demarcation dynamite.
-bass solo-
Promiscuity promises anytime.
RUMMAGE SELL OF MY SLOE!!
PARALIZER SICK -FINITE AUTOMATA!!
NOIZELESS PSYCHIATRICAL LAPIDETE!!!
HIPOTETICAL PROUD, FOUNDLY DAMAGE YOU!!
TO HOIST SHEEP NESTORIAN ELOPE!!!


here´s the lyrics for a song:
Holdback impish Noize Maker
Pang transgresor take the picture
Moan Nok of inimical Jolt, Moan Nok of inimical Jolt

(ok, thats it, hahaha.)

Nki 04-11-2008 01:17 AM

MySpace.com - coiote - MX - Alternative / Regional Mexican / Latin - www.myspace.com/coiotewestern
MySpace.com - coiote - MX - Alternative / Regional Mexican / Latin - www.myspace.com/coiotewestern
this is my Band... this is how I play guitar.. this is how I feel... this is me
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also this is a page where every single day I write something in my Diary
hi5 - gil

Harakiri 04-11-2008 01:24 AM

I feel your body and I feel your breath.

If you are asleep, I whispered,

“I love you” in your ears.

If you are reading poetries from me

Those are the proofs of my love to you

My Love to you that passes through time and space,

Beyond life itself

And there are some things that I need to show them to you

Some things that really important,

Which are the beat of my heart and Melody of Love when I saw you,

When my eyes saw you,

The only angel who walks on Earth,

The girl that broke my heart,

The girl that made me realized that,

In this world, there is an Angel that lives, walks, and

Gracious

That is You



I need comments, come on, PM me or what so ever

Nki 04-11-2008 01:30 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Harakiri (Post 456560)
I feel your body and I feel your breath.

If you are asleep, I whispered,

“I love you” in your ears.

If you are reading poetries from me

Those are the proofs of my love to you

My Love to you that passes through time and space,

Beyond life itself

And there are some things that I need to show them to you

Some things that really important,

Which are the beat of my heart and Melody of Love when I saw you,

When my eyes saw you,

The only angel who walks on Earth,

The girl that broke my heart,

The girl that made me realized that,

In this world, there is an Angel that lives, walks, and

Gracious

That is You



I need comments, come on, PM me or what so ever

Yeah, pretty cool, while i read it I imagine a boy talking to a beauty girl in comma, just like a shotfilm or something

Kajitsu 04-12-2008 12:21 PM

Beautiful, Harakiri!

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 04-12-2008 11:45 PM

All my stuff is in A Lonely Philosopher's Poems...

Fateh 04-12-2008 11:50 PM

hey freind i want give you this

SamuraiAlchemistNinja 04-12-2008 11:50 PM

Ah, it's not showing up, friend =(

MitcheruOtaku 04-15-2008 01:06 AM

I Try to Help

I try to help
by reaching out.
Sometimes maybe
when I shouldn\'t.
Many times it may
not be welcome,
and even angers.
Once in a while
it can help
to heal.
Either way,
I try to help.

~ Mitcheru

KikiBunny23 04-15-2008 01:08 AM

This is just a little something I came up with...

Think you can control me? Well you\'re wrong. Do you see how strong I can be? Do you see how weak I really am. The pages in the book turn, as another chapter in my life closes. I\'m a new girl now. One of the future, not the past. To late to dwell on what has come, yet to early to see what is to be. I\'m a new girl now, living for the future...not the past.


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