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Orihimegirl123 05-24-2008 05:46 PM

k here are a couple of mine

Dream Forever
Life is but a dream, it isn't as real as you want it to be. But sometimes dreams are all we really have left.

Decay
Drifting, violent, sobbing screams.
Erie laughterm haunting dreams.
Creeping fears, falling tears.
Arriving in the darkness after such sudden light, then in
Yelling, fury the last of my hope starts to decay...


Insanity
Instintly my life is over locked in this room.
Nothing seems real as the
Sorrow comes to play...
Again. I thought it was gone.
No, I guess it never was.
I was mistaken
To think that
Your love could ease me insanity.

MitcheruOtaku 05-31-2008 05:29 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Orihimegirl123 (Post 496777)
k here are a couple of mine

Dream Forever
Life is but a dream, it isn't as real as you want it to be. But sometimes dreams are all we really have left.

Decay
Drifting, violent, sobbing screams.
Erie laughterm haunting dreams.
Creeping fears, falling tears.
Arriving in the darkness after such sudden light, then in
Yelling, fury the last of my hope starts to decay...


Insanity
Instintly my life is over locked in this room.
Nothing seems real as the
Sorrow comes to play...
Again. I thought it was gone.
No, I guess it never was.
I was mistaken
To think that
Your love could ease me insanity.

Those are great!!

MitcheruOtaku 05-31-2008 05:30 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by KikiBunny23 (Post 496394)
Something I came up with a few wekks ago

You think I'm strong?
Well guess what...you're wrong.
I'm just as weak as when I was small,
but that's kept inside.
I don't know how long.
Different phases,
same old me...
forgiving as ever,
can't you see?
The act ends here,
with this last line.
For I need you
But you don't need me

Another great poem!!

KikiBunny23 05-31-2008 05:59 PM

Scarlet Blood

I'm dying inside, and nobody cares.
Can't somebody come save me?
Deep scarlet drops,
fall to the floor,
I'm dying inside.
Nobody sees the tears I cry,
cause I always hide,
before they see my eyes.
I want to live, but don't know how.
So for now,
I relish the pain,
this sharp blade brings,
watching the dark scarlet drops,
drip to the floor.
I'm dying inside,
you will never know.
Know I lay,
dead on the floor.
I gave in to the pain,
cut to deep.
I made the mistake,
all those other teens made.
Did you not believe me,
When I said goodbye?
I will never see tomorrow,
as my world goes black.
Scarlet blood around me,
as I say my last goodbye.

manganimefan227 05-31-2008 09:12 PM

Heres a funny one-

On top of a mountain
All covered in trees
that lost all it's people
when attacked by a chimpanzee

They ran down the mountain
and straight through the park
and reach the hotel
just right before dark

Some people got rooms
some slept in the lounge
some actually slept
and others stayed up singing campfire songs

Oh they sang so loud
they woke up the crowd
and early next morning
they got kicked out

Tey were forced back to the mountain
attacked by the chimpanzee
so let's just say for now
they are hiding in the trees

so next time you climb a mountain
attacked by a chimpanzee
just run to the hotel
but don't you dare sing.

Kajitsu 05-31-2008 09:52 PM

Wow, that was so not depressing! What a change of the aura around this thread.

KikiBunny23 05-31-2008 10:00 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by MitcheruOtaku (Post 502457)
Another great poem!!

haha thanks

tsukimoon 05-31-2008 10:35 PM

Too many and I want to show them all >.< Here's a few short ones to start:

None of them have titles:

A break from the rest
It sparkles and shines
Surface unbroken
The moon in its eyes
Like cool, molten glass
It bends to her hand
Testing the waters
Alone in the sand
A dip and it's over
The ripples recede
Swallowed her whole
Alone in the reeds.

~♥ ~♥

A single diamond in a sea of stone
A bittersweet beauty
Solitary, alone
Buried deep
Deep inside
Its shimmering splendor
Behind closed eyes
As it rolled down her cheek
Screaming truth with such grace
She looked out at the world
A smile on her face.

~♥ ~♥

Like a wave hits the shore
She broke down on the floor
Like the incoming tide
Tears flooded her eyes
Out flowed the crimson
The tears from her heart
Like the letter he wrote
It has been torn apart
She reached for the knife
Cold steel pressing down
The red kiss of life
It freed her, let her drown.

~♥ ~♥

That's it for now... Though I have at least one more I'd like to post, I'll post it later :D

Please tell me what you think ^.^

tsukimoon 05-31-2008 10:45 PM

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Mm.. here's that other one right now actually.

I attached it because it would be an annoyingly long post.

It's a poem that I wrote for lit a while ago... not my usual style but I personally love the topic ^.^

Called "Smile"

TalnSG 06-01-2008 05:22 PM

Tsukimoon, I like your writing. I skipped the post with "Smiles" because that title just sounded like something I didn't care to read. But after reading the short three, I decided it might be worth reading. All four are good.


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